RE: [ldapext] draft-bergeson-uddi-ldap-schema-02.txt

["Bruce Bergeson" <[e-mail]>]

Hello, We do plan on updating the draft with an '03' version.  I have
modified the draft based on your comments and attached the latest.  I am
waiting for one more reviewer to complete his work before the update. 
Thanks for your input.  Below each suggestion I have outlined the
actions taken. Regards,-Bruce


>>> "Andrew Sciberras" <[e-mail]> 2/12/04 11:12:03
PM >>>Hi, > We have updated the draft
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-bergeson-uddi-ldap-schema-02.txt
> based on a round of initial reviews and we want to progress it to RFC
status. > Before requesting the Area Director to initiate a last call,
we wanted to see if anyone has any further feedback.
 >Bruce, Kent, and Vijay.So, do you plan to release an '03' version of
this draft before requesting a last call?I guess I'm curious as to
whether my comments (sent to the list on 19/12/03, see below) have been
taken into consideration. Cheers,Andrew Sciberras
Software Engineer
Adacel Technologies Ltd
250 Bay Street Brighton
t. 8530 7844
m. 0412 098 771   >G'Day,
>Just some comments regarding 'LDAP Schema for UDDI'.>Section 5.2
>The equality matching rule for a distinguished name cannot be a
>caseIgnoreMatch.Changed equality matching rule to
distinguishedNameMatch.>For the following attributes:
>* uddiName
>* uddiServiceKey
>* uddiBindingKey>It is explicitly stated that the values of this
attribute may not be blank.
>The other attributes with a DirectoryString string syntax do not
carry
>this statement. I'm not sure what this is implying, but I feel that I
should
>note that none of the DirectoryString attributes are permitted to have
a
>blank value.For uddiName.  This was an early attempt to describe the
must relationship of this attribute type definition to its containing
object class definition.  I have removed the sentence.For
uddiServiceKey.  This is referring to an uddiServiceKey used in an UDDI
inquiry operation.  Changed to: If a uddiServiceKey is received via an
inquiry operation, the key values may not be blank.For uddiBindingKey. 
This is referring to an uddiBindingKey used in an UDDI inquiry
operation.  Changed to:  If an uddiBindingKey is received via an inquiry
operation, the key values may not be blank.>Section 5.17
>"When saving a new uddiBusinessService structure, pass an empty
>uddiServiceKey value"
>Section 5.18
>"When saving a new uddiBindingTemplate structure, pass an empty
>uddiBindingKey value"
>These would be strictly illegal since a DirectoryString must have at
least
>one character.This describes the UDDI create operations data
structure.  The UDDI server must generate the appropriate key value to
pass to the LDAP server.>Section 5.41
>I don't think you intended to have a boolean syntax for this
attribute
>Since this attribute contains an integer, perhaps an Integer syntax
with an
>integerMatch equality rule would be more appropriate?Changed to: 
SYNTAX 1.3.6.1.4.1.1466.115.121.1.27 EQUALITY integerMatch>Section 5.43
>Perhaps a Boolean syntax with a booleanMatch would be more
appropriate?Yes.  Changed to: SYNTAX 1.3.6.1.4.1.1466.115.121.1.7
EQUALITY booleanMatch>[RFC3377], [RFC2829], [RFC2830], are not listed in
the Normative
>References, but are present within the document.I added [RFC2829],
[RFC2830] to the Normative References and changed [RFC3377] to
[LDAPv3].