RE: [lemonade] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-lemonade-compress-01.txt

Hi all,
I have a few comments on this new revision:
General: Section numbers are missing.
Introduction and overview: "Hopefully it will not be necessary to define additional algorithms." Can we remove this sentence?
The Compress command: "The client MUST NOT send additional commands until it has seen the result of COMPRESS." Can we replace the word "additional" with "any" to make sure that it's clear?
The Compress command: "If both SASL/TLS and COMPRESS are in use, the data should be..." isn't this a MUST?
Compression efficiency: "(just a tiny bit) pmore CPU than level 9. Independent verification" typo in pmore.

Best regards: Zoltán Ördögh
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Enhancements to Internet email to support diverse service environments Working Group of the IETF.

	Title		: The IMAP COMPRESS=DEFLATE Extension
	Author(s)	: A. Gulbrandsen
	Filename	: draft-ietf-lemonade-compress-01.txt
	Pages		: 8
	Date		: 2006-6-22

The COMPRESS=DEFLATE extension allows an IMAP connection to be
    compressed using the DEFLATE algorithm, such that effective
    compression is available even when TLS is used.

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