Re: [Lime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-01.txt

Dear Authors, et. al,
please kindly consider my comments to the current version of the draft:

   - I suggest not to introduce persistent mode for what otherwise
   characterized as on-demand OAM, e.g. ping and traceroute. Instead, consider
   using LMAP architecture with Controller, Measurement Agent, and Collector
   roles/elements, and, specifically, draft-ietf-lmap-yang
   <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lmap-yang-11>
   - What is the need to use tp-attribute-type and tp-attribute-value
   which, in my view, provide partial technology-specific list even though the
   model claims to be technology independnet.
   - Again, the CL OAM methods model uses some LSP ID but comes short
   referencing draft-zheng-mpls-lsp-ping-yang-cfg work.

Regards,
Greg

On Fri, Feb 24, 2017 at 2:03 AM, wangzitao <wangzitao@huawei.com> wrote:

> Dear WG,
>
> We update the Connectionless OAM Retrieval Method YANG document to address
> some issues raised in WGLC discussions.
> In this new version, we fix some nits and rewrite some sentences to make
> it more articulately. And we also add some new RPCs such as
> 'cc-persistent-create', 'cc-persistent-modify', 'cc-persistent-delete',
> 'pd-persistent-create', 'pd-persistent-modify',
> and 'pd-persistent-delete', which allow user to trigger persistent
> CC/Path-discovery OAM while specifying the options for data-export from
> device.
> More details please see the draft. Comments and suggestions are welcome!
>
> Best Regards!
> -Michael
>
>
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> txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Layer Independent OAM Management in the
> Multi-Layer Environment of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Retrieval Methods YANG Data Model for
> Connectionless Operations, Administration, and Maintenance(OAM) protocols
>         Authors         : Deepak Kumar
>                           Michael Wang
>                           Qin Wu
>                           Reshad Rahman
>                           Srihari Raghavan
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-lime-yang-
> connectionless-oam-methods-01.txt
>         Pages           : 37
>         Date            : 2017-02-23
>
> Abstract:
>    This document presents a retrieval method YANG Data model for
>    connectionless OAM protocols.  It provides a technology-independent
>    RPC commands for connectionless OAM protocols.  The retrieval methods
>    model presented here can be extended to include technology specific
>    details.  This is leading to uniformity between OAM protocols and
>    support both nested OAM workflows (i.e., performing OAM functions at
>    different levels through a unified interface) and interactive OAM
>    workflows ( i.e., performing OAM functions at same levels through a
>    unified interface).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lime-yang-
> connectionless-oam-methods/
>
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> connectionless-oam-methods-01
>
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