Re: [lmap] draft-ietf-lmap-framework-08: AD review - part 1

"Scott Weeks" <surfer@mauigateway.com> Sun, 09 November 2014 21:29 UTC

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Hello,

I was asked to send this to the list.


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OLD:

   Finally we introduce several components that are outside the scope of

   initial LMAP work and will be provided through existing protocols or

   applications.

NEW:

   Finally we introduce several components that are outside the scope of

   initial LMAP work (see in figure 1 "out of scope" and will be provided

   through existing protocols or applications.
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very small correction:

"...initial LMAP work (see in figure 1 "out of scope") and will be provided.."


scott








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