Re: [lp-wan] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01.txt

Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> Mon, 27 February 2017 17:12 UTC

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From: Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 27 Feb 2017 11:12:47 -0600
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Subject: Re: [lp-wan] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01.txt
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My technical comment is
no bootstrapping overview has been included in the document. Why?

Regards,

behcet

On Mon, Feb 27, 2017 at 11:11 AM, Behcet Sarikaya
<sarikaya2012@gmail.com> wrote:
>  Folks,
>
> This should be Revision 00 not 01.
>
> Regards,
>
> Behcet
>
> On Mon, Feb 27, 2017 at 11:08 AM,  <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Low Power Wide-Area Networks of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : LPWAN Overview
>>         Author          : Stephen Farrell
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01.txt
>>         Pages           : 37
>>         Date            : 2017-02-27
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    Low Power Wide Area Networks (LPWAN) are wireless technologies with
>>    characteristics such as large coverage areas, low bandwidth, possibly
>>    very small packet and application layer data sizes and long battery
>>    life operation.  This memo is an informational overview of the set of
>>    LPWAN technologies being considered in the IETF and of the gaps that
>>    exist between the needs of those technologies and the goal of running
>>    IP in LPWANs.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview/
>>
>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-01
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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