Re: [lp-wan] Last Call: <draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14.txt> (Data Model for Static Context Header Compression (SCHC)) to Proposed Standard
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Subject: Re: [lp-wan] Last Call: <draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14.txt> (Data Model for Static Context Header Compression (SCHC)) to Proposed Standard
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n 12/07/2022 14:10, The IESG wrote: > > The IESG has received a request from the IPv6 over Low Power Wide-Area > Networks WG (lpwan) to consider the following document: - 'Data Model for > Static Context Header Compression (SCHC)' > <draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14.txt> as Proposed Standard Some editorial quirks. RFC3168, RFC7641, RFC7959 appear in the YANG module but I do not see them in the I-D References. In the YANG module and in the text, I see tick duration tick-duration ticks-duration Consistency is good. Likewise YANG id YANG identifier YANG referenceid In compression-rule-entry, the diagram has 'Field 1' the description 'Field ID' WG List mailto:p-wan TLP is out of date (but is a challenge to get the current one incorporated) YANG features could do with references even if only to this I-D rule-id-value must be unique considering its length. I am unsure what this is saying - is it in conjunction with the length? s.8 The rule contains some sensible informations... sensitive information? I have not looked at the technicalities. I hope to but time is against me (yes, I know it is July 26th). Tom Petch > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2022-07-26. Exceptionally, comments may > be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the beginning > of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document describes a YANG data model for the SCHC (Static > Context Header Compression) compression and fragmentation rules. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model/ > > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > The document contains these normative downward references. > See RFC 3967 for additional information: > rfc7967: Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP) Option for No Server Response (Informational - Independent Submission) > > > > > _______________________________________________ > IETF-Announce mailing list > IETF-Announce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce > . >