[Lsr] AD Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-02

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 28 November 2018 22:38 UTC

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Subject: [Lsr] AD Review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-02
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Dear authors:

Thanks for taking on this work!!

I have just a couple of comments.

(1) There are too many authors in the front page.  I know that the list was
cut prior to rfc7810 being processed, and that Les was added to hold the
pen on this revision, so I'll let this one proceed.  Just one thing: please
group the authors by affiliation (which will reduce the size of the header).

(2) Both rfc7471 and rfc7810 can be Informative references.

(3) There's an active thread related to the definition of Available
Bandwidth [1].  Please keep an eye on it and participate as needed.

I don't think the ongoing discussion is a showstopper at this point.  I am
starting the IETF Last Call.

Thanks!

Alvaro.

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/lsr/zOdpuIbCViJToCsC9mNnRmoEiQw