Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt
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From: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt
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Acee
Thank you for the list of features in s.2.4; much appreciated. A couple
of minor editorial tweaks perhaps to
11. admin-control> Support Administrative control of the protocol
26. bfd: Support BFD detection of OSPF neighbor reachability
[RFC5880], xref target="RFC5881"/>
With the BFD reference, yes, I like
reference "RFC YYYY - YANG Data Model for Bidirectional
but would still add a Note to the RFC Editor asking them to replace YYYY
with the assigned RFC number for
[I-D.ietf-bfd-yang]
(which is how it appears in the Normative References).
And you still have a
link-state database
in
rpc clear-database
which I prefer to be
Link State Database
Tom Petch
----- Original Message -----
From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
To: <lsr@ietf.org>
Sent: Tuesday, August 28, 2018 6:34 PM
> This version addresses Tom Petch's last call comments.
> Thanks,
> Acee
>
> On 8/28/18, 1:10 PM, "Lsr on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org"
<lsr-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the
IETF.
>
> Title : Yang Data Model for OSPF Protocol
> Authors : Derek Yeung
> Yingzhen Qu
> Jeffrey Zhang
> Ing-Wher Chen
> Acee Lindem
> Filename : draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt
> Pages : 115
> Date : 2018-08-28
>
> Abstract:
> This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
configure
> and manage OSPF. The model is based on YANG 1.1 as defined in
RFC
> 7950 and conforms to the Network Management Datastore
Architecture
> (NDMA) as described in RFC 8342.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-yang/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14
>
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- [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt internet-drafts
- Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt tom petch
- Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-14.txt tom petch