Re: [Lsr] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-te-app-14: (with COMMENT)

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Wed, 10 June 2020 15:56 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-te-app-14: (with COMMENT)
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Rob -

Thanx for your review.
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> Subject: Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-te-app-14: (with
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> 
> I'm not sure whether this should really be a discuss ... I raised a similar
> concern on the OSPF document as part of a discuss, and presume
> consistency is
> helpful.
> 
> 4.1.  Application Identifier Bit Mask
> 
>   UDABM Length: Indicates the length in octets (0-8) of the
>        User Defined Application Identifier Bit Mask. The length SHOULD
>        be the minimum required to send all bits which are set.
> 
>    User Defined Application Identifier Bits have no relationship to
>    Standard Application Identifier Bits and are not managed by IANA or
>    any other standards body.  It is recommended that bits are used
>    starting with Bit 0 so as to minimize the number of octets required
>    to advertise all UDAs.
> 
> In section 4.1, I think that the document should also add the sentence (taken
> from the previous paragraph) "Bits that are not transmitted MUST be treated
> as
> if they are set to 0 on receipt."  Note, that I also think that this behaviour
> is implicitly required from the description of UDABM Length.
> 
[Les:] I agree - but I think I will move/rewrite the sentence so that one instance indicates this applies to both SABM/UDABM.

   Les

> Regards,
> Rob
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