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"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Fri, 10 January 2020 15:53 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-isis-te-app@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-isis-te-app@ietf.org>
CC: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>, "lsr-chairs@ietf.org" <lsr-chairs@ietf.org>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>
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Alvaro -

Happy New Year to you!

Thanx for the extensive review of this draft and draft-ietf-ospf-te-link-attr-reuse-10. 
It is clear that you spent a good deal of time on this and covered a lot of ground - much appreciated.

We are working on addressing your comments - but it will take us a bit of time to complete that - please be patient.

One question. In several places you are requesting a forward reference to the IANA Considerations section. For example in Section 4.1.
I find this ask rather unusual. 
Section 4.1 is defining the format of some fields in the new sub-TLV. What would be the need of a forward reference to the IANA section?
I cannot recall ever doing the equivalent in any draft I have worked on.

???

Thanx.

   Les

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