[Lsr] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13: (with COMMENT)

[Erik Kline via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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[[ nits ]]

[ section 1 ]
* "(e.g., SR-MPLS" is missing a closing parenthesis

[ section 3 ]
* "...unless all of its interfaces...":" do management interfaces, or other
  interfaces over which no forwarding is taking place, count in this definition
  of "all"?  If not, does this text need to be tightened or is this just one
  of those things all implementers will naturally figure out? (I'm actually
  betting this is just something readers will intuit.)