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Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Thu, 25 January 2024 16:43 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
To: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27
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Hi,
  Yes, thanks for catching this.

Best Regards,
Meral

From: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, January 25, 2024 at 8:13 AM
To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org <gen-art@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang.all@ietf.org <draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang.all@ietf.org>, last-call <last-call@ietf.org>, lsr <lsr@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27
Thanks for the review Meral!!! See one inline.

> On Jan 25, 2024, at 00:05, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2024-01-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

I guess you mean this is “almost” ready since it still needs to go through the IESG telecast.

Thanks,
Acee


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