[Lsr] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-yang-isis-reverse-metric-04: (with COMMENT)

Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 29 November 2021 11:52 UTC

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Subject: [Lsr] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-lsr-yang-isis-reverse-metric-04: (with COMMENT)

Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lsr-yang-isis-reverse-metric-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks to Vijay Gurbani for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/vTI3euK_FgI2nI-8482WikVehC8).

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Section 2.2. , paragraph 11, nit:
> eudo-node LSP for this interface. Otherwise it will only increment the metric
>                                   ^^^^^^^^^
A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "Otherwise".

Section 2.2. , paragraph 15, nit:
> ic announcements from neighbors. By default reverse metric handling is disab
>                                  ^^^^^^^^^^
Did you mean: "By default,"?

These URLs point to tools.ietf.org, which is being deprecated:
 * https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfcXXXX
 * https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-42
 * https://tools.ietf.org/wg/lsr/

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