Re: [Lsr] draft-hopps-lsr-yang-isis-reverse-metric-02

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>, Christian Hopps <chopps@chopps.org>, "lsr@ietf.org" <lsr@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Lsr] draft-hopps-lsr-yang-isis-reverse-metric-02
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] draft-hopps-lsr-yang-isis-reverse-metric-02
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Hi Tom, 

I agree with your comments. I'm going to start a WG adoption poll on this document as it is pretty straight-forward. See one inline.  

On 11/24/19, 2:44 AM, "Lsr on behalf of tom petch" <lsr-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:

    Christian
    
    Some stray thoughts
    
    /intermediate system routeing/intermediate system routing/
    since we have to use the American style:-(

We sometimes violate this rule if it is a direct reference to an ISO document of a text lifted directly from ISO specification. However, the two instances are not so I'd recommend, "Intermediate System to Intermediate System (IS-IS) routing" for both references. 

Thanks,
Acee

    
         import ietf-routing { prefix "rt"; }
    lacks a reference clause and the reference should be in the Normative
    References
    
    
         import ietf-isis { prefix "isis"; }
    lacks a reference clause
    
    IS-IS reverse metric functionality [RFC8500].
    YANG module must be plain text and this looks like it is not.

    
    Tom Petch
    
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