Re: [Lsr] draft-ietf-lsr-isis-fast-flooding IANA section

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Hi John,

> From: John Scudder <[e-mail]> 
> Sent: Wednesday, January 24, 2024 1:46 PM

> Hi Authors,
>
> This isn't a full review of your document, however, I was looking at it and noticed that in the IANA section, you create two registries with the "expert review" policy. RFC 8126 says that you need to provide guidance to the designated experts for such registries. If you plan on having these registries grouped under https://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-codepoints.xhtml then you will be covered since there is blanket guidance for all registries in that group, but then you should mention in your IANA section that you want them grouped there.

Thank you for your initial review, your comment and your suggestion.

You are very correct, and as a correction we are proposing the following two changes


§7.2
OLD: This document creates the following sub-TLV Registry
NEW: This document creates the following sub-TLV Registry under the "IS-IS TLV Codepoints" grouping

§7.3
OLD: This document also requests IANA to create a new registry for assigning Flag bits advertised in the Flags sub-TLV.
NEW: This document requests IANA to create a new registry, under the "IS-IS TLV Codepoints" grouping, for assigning Flag bits advertised in the Flags sub-TLV.


https://github.com/Bruno007/draft-lsr-isis-fast-flooding/commit/cbcbbd6d0aa21c91a073dd211609bd4ae95f8ab0

(modulo 2 typos that I've corrected on my local repo)

Comments are welcome.
We can also publish a new draft at your convenience. Just say so.

Thanks

--Bruno, on behalf of co-authors

> Thanks,

> -John
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