Re: [Lwip] lwig-terminology-02, now with power terminology

Dear Carsten and others

I've read the new draft and offer some suggestions, mostly editorial, 
but there are a couple of other constraints that I think might merit 
mentioning (particularly regularory), and a couple of questions I have 
embedded in the text. The edited version is here:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/472780/draft-ietf-lwig-terminology-02_CGP.txt

and the changes may be found with diff.

Hope this may be of some use.

Regards - Charles

On 28/03/2013 16:47, Carsten Bormann wrote:
> As we discussed in Orlando, a small design team charged ahead and wrote down some power terminology, creating a new section 4 in the terminology draft.  Thanks Ari, Dominique, Peter.
> And thanks Jari for letting us borrow some text out of lwig-cellular.
>
> Please have a look:
>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lwig-terminology-02
> In Orlando, we said we wanted to time-box this into March, so:
>
> -- Is this the section that we wanted?
> -- Does this need major surgery, or can we do a couple small fixes and then go for WGLC?
>
> Grüße, Carsten
>
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