[Madinas] Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-13

CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Tue, 02 July 2024 16:28 UTC

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Date: Tue, 02 Jul 2024 18:27:58 +0200
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Thanks a lot Christian for your review.

We have adapted the text (to appear in -14) to incorporate your suggestion:

NEW TEXT:

   Table 1 summarizes current practices for Android and iOS, as the time
   of writing this document (original source posted at:
   https://www.fing.com/news/private-mac-address-on-ios-14, latest
   wayback machine's snapshot available here:
   https://web.archive.org/web/20230905111429/https://www.fing.com/news/
   private-mac-address-on-ios-14, updated based on findings from the
   authors).

Thanks,

Carlos

On Tue, Jul 2, 2024 at 3:31 PM Christian Amsüss via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Christian Amsüss
> Review result: Ready
>
> The document does what it says in the title: It describes the state of
> affairs
> – assembling data from various organizations along with own observations,
> and
> creating the context around them.
>
> As such, the document does not touch on typical ART area issues.
>
> There is just a single editorial note I have: The fing.com URL is not a
> link,
> presumably because it was not a Cool URI and is now 404. That oddity might
> be
> less intrusive if the link were converted into an informative reference,
> where
> in the bibliography both the original URI and the latest wayback machine's
> snapshot[1] are given.
>
> [1]:
>
> https://web.archive.org/web/20230905111429/https://www.fing.com/news/private-mac-address-on-ios-14
>
>
>