Re: [Madinas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-11.txt

[CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <[e-mail]>]

Hi Med,

We have incorporated most of your comments in the new revision of the
draft. Some comments from my side:

- We have not updated the title of the document as you suggested, as we
have just used what we have in our charter.
- We have kept the tables, not only the pointer to the github, as this was
discussed in the WG and keeping it was the consensus.

Thanks!

Carlos

On Thu, Feb 22, 2024 at 10:35 AM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <
[e-mail]> wrote:

> Thanks a lot Med. We will address your comments in the next revision.
>
> Carlos
>
> On Thu, Feb 22, 2024 at 10:25 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> FWIW, please find below some comments about this draft:
>>
>> * pdf:
>> https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2024/draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-11-rev%20Med.pdf
>> * doc:
>> https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/edit/master/2024/draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-11-rev%20Med.doc
>>
>> The publication as an RFC will be challenged, but I think the section
>> about taxonomy is sufficient on its own to justify that.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Med
>>
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>> > 11.txt
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>> > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-11.txt is
>> > now available. It is a work item of the MAC Address Device
>> > Identification for Network and Application Services (MADINAS) WG of
>> > the IETF.
>> >
>> >    Title:   Randomized and Changing MAC Address state of affairs
>> >    Authors: Juan Carlos Zuniga
>> >             Carlos J. Bernardos
>> >             Amelia Andersdotter
>> >    Name:    draft-ietf-madinas-mac-address-randomization-11.txt
>> >    Pages:   18
>> >    Dates:   2024-02-20
>> >
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>> >    Users are becoming more aware that their online activity leaves a
>> >    vast digital footprint, that communications are not always properly
>> >    secured, and that their location and actions can be easily tracked.
>> >    One of the main factors for the location tracking issue is the wide
>> >    use of long-lasting identifiers, such as MAC addresses.
>> >
>> >    There have been several initiatives at the IETF and the IEEE 802
>> >    standards committees to overcome some of these privacy issues.
>> > This
>> >    document provides an overview of these activities, with the
>> > intention
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>> >    between present and future standardization activities.
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