Re: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14.txt

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Tue, 11 July 2023 09:45 UTC

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From: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>
To: Abdussalam Baryun <abdussalambaryun@gmail.com>, "manet@ietf.org" <manet@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension@tools.ietf.org>, Mobile Ad-hoc Networks Working Group <manet-chairs@ietf.org>
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AB

You are correct. And there are three points still open from David's review. One of which will take a little bit to address while the others are pretty straightforward. I have personally lost a bit of energy on these docs since progress on them has been stalled for a very long time due to working group process. I personally don't plan to spend any time on the documents until we see a plan and timeline from the chairs on progressing (or killing) the documents.

This said, if you have any comments on the document, particularly related to David's second comment, please send them...

Thanks
Lou

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On July 11, 2023 5:31:34 AM Abdussalam Baryun <abdussalambaryun@gmail.com> wrote:

Hi WG_draft Editor,

Please note that there were no changes to the draft, only the expiry_date/reference_section, I am not sure if the draft has completed all issues raised by David Black [1], please advise.

AB

[1]  https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/manet/LsXikIoQitqiEJ1mvSn9hD1e5R4/


On Tue, Jul 11, 2023 at 1:31 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>> wrote:

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Mobile Ad-hoc Networks
(MANET) WG of the IETF.

   Title           : DLEP DiffServ Aware Credit Window Extension
   Authors         : Bow-Nan Cheng
                     David Wiggins
                     Lou Berger
   Filename        : draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14.txt
   Pages           : 6
   Date            : 2023-07-10

Abstract:
   This document defines an extension to the Dynamic Link Exchange
   Protocol (DLEP) that enables a DiffServ aware credit-window scheme
   for destination-specific and shared flow control.

The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension/

There is also an htmlized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-14

Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts


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