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Re: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-04.txt

"Wiggins, David - 0665 - MITLL" <David.Wiggins@ll.mit.edu> Fri, 16 February 2018 20:28 UTC

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From: "Wiggins, David - 0665 - MITLL" <David.Wiggins@ll.mit.edu>
To: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>, "manet-chairs@ietf.org" <manet-chairs@ietf.org>, "manet@ietf.org" <manet@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [manet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-04.txt
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Thanks for updating this, Lou.

I had a bit of trouble parsing this:
"Note that neither Destination Down or Update Message SHOULD NOT
be sent for the destination MAC address contained in the Link Characteristics
Response Message."

The double negative threw me... maybe just omit "neither"?

Otherwise, looks good!

David

On 2/16/18, 10:15 AM, "manet on behalf of Lou Berger" <manet-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of lberger@labn.net> wrote:

    Hi,
    
         I thought it would be good to publish this version which captures 
    all LC comments and discussion to date.  Please review (diffs) and let 
    us know if we missed anything or if you still would like to see any 
    additional language changes?
    
    Chairs,
    
         What's the next step?  Is LC now closed?  What else would you like 
    to see happen before publication request?
    
    Thanks,
    
    Lou
    
    
    On 2/16/2018 10:09 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
    > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
    > This draft is a work item of the Mobile Ad-hoc Networks WG of the IETF.
    >
    >          Title           : DLEP Multi-Hop Forwarding Extension
    >          Authors         : Bow-Nan Cheng
    >                            Lou Berger
    > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-04.txt
    > 	Pages           : 10
    > 	Date            : 2018-02-16
    >
    > Abstract:
    >     This document defines an extension to the DLEP protocol that enables
    >     the reporting and control of Multi-Hop Forwarding by DLEP capable
    >     modems.
    >
    >
    > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension/
    >
    > There are also htmlized versions available at:
    > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-04
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-04
    >
    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-04
    >
    >
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