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[manet] AODVv2 reivew

Justin Dean <bebemaster@gmail.com> Wed, 02 March 2016 04:19 UTC

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I've completed my review of the draft 13 of AODVv2.  Attached is my updated
with comments (marked JWD) and various inline fixes draft/review.   I've
also included a diff to illustrate the inline fixes.  I did not review the
security section.  I did have a few major comments which are marked with
JWD!

Justin

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