Re: [manet] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6130 (5780)

Christopher Dearlove <christopher.dearlove@gmail.com> Sun, 14 July 2019 09:52 UTC

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Date: Sun, 14 Jul 2019 10:52:25 +0100
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Subject: Re: [manet] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6130 (5780)
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In my opinion, as an author, this erratum is correct.

> On 14 Jul 2019, at 07:30, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6130,
> "Mobile Ad Hoc Network (MANET) Neighborhood Discovery Protocol (NHDP)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5780
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <nmalykh@ieee.org>
> 
> Section: F.3
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>   The content of the Interface Information Base is in this case
>   identical to than in Example 1, except that the 2-Hop Set contains an
>   extra 2-Hop Tuple with N2_neighbor_iface_addr_list being {2} and
>   N2_2hop_addr being {4}.  These two 2-Hop Tuples are illustrated by
>   the two lines from {2} to {3} and (2) to {4}, respectively.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>   The content of the Interface Information Base is in this case
>   identical to than in Example 1, except that the 2-Hop Set contains an
>   extra 2-Hop Tuple with N2_neighbor_iface_addr_list being {2} and
>   N2_2hop_addr being {4}.  These two 2-Hop Tuples are illustrated by
>   the two lines from {2} to {3} and {2} to {4}, respectively.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Parentheses are mistakenly typed
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC6130 (draft-ietf-manet-nhdp-15)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Mobile Ad Hoc Network (MANET) Neighborhood Discovery Protocol (NHDP)
> Publication Date    : April 2011
> Author(s)           : T. Clausen, C. Dearlove, J. Dean
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Mobile Ad-hoc Networks
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG