[manet] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06.txt

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Subject: [manet] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06.txt
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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-multi-hop-extension-06.txt
Reviewer: Russ White
Review Date: 30 March 2019
IETF LC End Date: 5 April 2019
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary: 

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Quality and Readibility:

This draft is well written, easy to read, and easy to understand.

Major Issues:

None found.

Minor Issues:

None found.

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