[manet] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5497 (1721)

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Subject: [manet] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5497 (1721)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5497,
"Representing Multi-Value Time in Mobile Ad Hoc Networks (MANETs)".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5497&eid=1721

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 6, pg.7

Original Text
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   The following data structure allows the representation of a single
|  time-value, or of a default time-value plus pairs of (time-values,
|  hop counts) for when hop-count-dependent time-values are required.
   [...]

Corrected Text
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   The following data structure allows the representation of a single
|  time-value, or of a default time-value plus pairs of (time-value,
|  hop count) for when hop-count-dependent time-values are required.
   [...]

Notes
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Rationale:
Each pair contains a single 'time-value' and a single 'hop-count'.
See text on pp. 8/9: multiple instances of "(time-value, hop count)".

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RFC5497 (draft-ietf-manet-timetlv-08)
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Title               : Representing Multi-Value Time in Mobile Ad Hoc Networks (MANETs)
Publication Date    : March 2009
Author(s)           : T. Clausen, C. Dearlove
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Mobile Ad-hoc Networks
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG