[martini] WGLC comments on draft-ietf-martini-gin

Alan Johnston <alan.b.johnston@gmail.com> Mon, 19 July 2010 18:49 UTC

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I have reviewed the document and believe it is ready to progress with no
technical issues.  A few minor issues are noted below that could be
addressed to improve the document, but aren't worth entering into the
tracker.

- Alan -

Section 5.1:

The first time the bnc parameter is introduced, it might be worth
explaining it stands for Bulk Number Contact - the first time I read it
I thought it stood for Bayonet Neill-Concelman...

Section 5.1:

There are a couple of "must"s that probably are "MUST"s.

Section 5.2:

There is some justification why the SIP-PBX MUST support Path, but none
is given here why the Registrar MUST support it.  Is it for the same reason?

Section 5.2:

While the SIP-PBX MUST include Proxy-Require:gin, it is possible a
registration might arrive at a Registrar with a bnc but no
Proxy-Require:gin.  Should we define the correct behavior of the
Registrar for this case?