[MBONED] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-mboned-deprecate-interdomain-asm-06: (with COMMENT)

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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mboned-deprecate-interdomain-asm-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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** Section 4.1.  This section appears to provide multiple definitions of
“separate administrative entities”.  Per the paragraph “The more inclusive
interpretation of this recommendation …”, it wasn’t clear to me under what
circumstance the reader should use the more “inclusive interpretation”.

** Section 4.  This section would benefit from being clearer on who should act
on a few of the recommendation:

-- Section 4.3 – vendors/developers of multicast applications?

-- Section 4.4 – not clear who is supposed to develop this guidance?

-- Section 4.6 – not clear who is supposed to developing this guidance long term

** Editorial Nits:
-- Section 3.2.3. Typo. s/particularily/particularly/

-- Section 4.9.  Typo. s/implentations/implementations/