[MBONED]Re: AD Review of draft-ietf-mboned-amt-yang-05

[linchangwang <[e-mail]>]

Hi Med,

Thank you for your review.
We appreciate your thoughtful comments and suggestions.

All your comments have been addressed in latest version.
Link: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mboned-amt-yang/06/

Pls check and let us know if there are any further comments.

Thanks,
Changwang

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主题: AD Review of draft-ietf-mboned-amt-yang-05


Hi Yisong , Changwang, Zheng, Xuesong, and Vinod,

Thank you for the effort put into this specification.

FWIW, you can find the full review at:


  *   pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2026/draft-ietf-mboned-amt-yang-05-rev%20Med.pdf
  *   doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/2026/draft-ietf-mboned-amt-yang-05-rev%20Med.doc

I’m listing below some key points:

# Narrative

Overall, I think that we need to work a bit the narrative part of the spec to explain how the module is supposed to be used.

# Features

As the module covers two distinct components, I think that we need to use features to conditionally trim part of the module that applies to specific components.

# Operational considerations

There are some operational considerations that we flag when using the module (detect anomalies based on mismatching address families, track discontinuity time for the counters, etc.). These should be called out in the module itself per the guidance in draft-ietf-opsawg-rfc5706bis, which says:

   Data Models (e.g., YANG) and other schema artifacts (JSON schema,
   YAML, CDDL, etc.) may be consumed out of the RFCs that specify them.
   As such, it is recommended that operational aspects for a data model
   (and similar artifacts) are documented as part of the model itself.
   Such considerations should not be duplicated in the narrative part of
   a specification that includes such artifacts.

# Types & Restrictions

There are some issues with some enum nodes as this doe sot allow for extensibility. A check is needed that is intended. Please refer to draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis on more guidance.

Likewise, there is a limitation to provide one single address per address family. Please check.

# Reusable types

Address-family identities and UDP grouping can be reused from existing specs. We don’t need to repeat those here.

# Clarify what is out of scope

For example, private key provisioning.

Please let me know if any clarification is needed for any of the points.

Cheers,
Med

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