Re: [media-types] sslkeylogfile review request

["Martin J. Dürst" <[e-mail]>]

Hello Martin,

A few comments below.

On 2024-04-15 13:19, Martin Thomson wrote:
> Hi Paul,
> 
> Type name:
>      application
> Subtype name:
>      sslkeylogfile
> Required parameters:
>      N/A
> Optional parameters:
>      N/A
> Encoding considerations:
>      8bit (Unicode without BOM or ASCII only)

This would be slightly easier to read if it were
"UTF-8 without BOM, or ASCII only".

The change from Unicode to UTF-8 (I hope that's what's intended) is 
important because both UTF-8 and UTF-16 (and UTF-32) can use a BOM.

Without the comma, it's syntactically possible to read this as
"UTF-8 without (BOM or ASCII) only", and one has to engage the semantic 
level to guess that it should be read as "(UTF-8 without BOM) or (ASCII 
only)".

> Security considerations:
>      See Section 3.
> Interoperability considerations:
>      Line endings might differ from platform convention
> Published specification:
>      This document

Please change that to something like "RFC XXXX" with a note to the RFC 
Editor to change this to the actual number on publication. This makes 
sure the registration template can stand on its own.

> Applications that use this media type:
>      Diagnostic and analysis tools that need to decrypt data that is otherwise protected by TLS.
> Fragment identifier considerations:
>      N/A
> Additional information:
>      Deprecated alias names for this type:
>          N/A
>     Magic number(s):
>         N/A
>     File extension(s):
>         N/A
>     Macintosh file type code(s):
>         N/A
> Person & email address to contact for further information:
>      See the Authors' Addresses section.

Again, please replace this with the actual information so that the 
registration template can stand on its own.

> Intended usage:
>      COMMON
> Restrictions on usage:
>      N/A
> Author:
>      See the Authors' Addresses section.

Same here.

Regards,   Martin.

> Change controller:
>      IESG
> 
> On Sun, Apr 14, 2024, at 20:58, Paul Libbrecht wrote:
>> Hey Martin,
>>
>> Please provide the complete registration text in the mailing-list so
>> the object of discussion is unambiguous.
>>
>> Thanks in advance.
>>
>> Paul
>>
>> On 14 Apr 2024, at 12:14, Martin Thomson wrote:
>>
>>> SSLKEYLOGFILE is a text file format used in diagnosing TLS connections.
>>>
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tls-keylogfile-01#name-iana-considerations
>>>
>>> Any feedback on the registration?
>>>
>>> media-types mailing list
>>> [e-mail]
>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/media-types
>>>
> 
> _______________________________________________
> media-types mailing list
> [e-mail]
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/media-types