[MEDIACTRL] gen-art review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-architecture-04.txt
Scott Brim <swb@employees.org> Mon, 19 January 2009 21:11 UTC
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-architecture-04.txt Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 2009-01-19 IETF LC End Date: 2009-01-26 IESG Telechat date: (not known) Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC with one nit. Details: It's good. I have a minor issue. I note that in the definition of media server ... Media Server (MS): The media server includes the mixer as defined in [RFC4353]. The media server plays announcements, it processes media streams for functions like Dual Tone Multi-Frequency (DTMF) detection and transcoding. The media server may also record media streams for supporting IVR functions like announcing conference participants. ... ... you don't include what seems to me to be its most essential function, to deliver media streams to SIP user agents (via RTP/SRTP). I just want to be sure that you didn't leave out fundamental functions because you were figuring out the more complex ones. swb _______________________________________________ MEDIACTRL mailing list MEDIACTRL@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mediactrl Supplemental Web Site: http://www.standardstrack.com/ietf/mediactrl
- [MEDIACTRL] gen-art review of draft-ietf-mediactr… Scott Brim
- Re: [MEDIACTRL] gen-art review of draft-ietf-medi… Tim Melanchuk
- Re: [MEDIACTRL] gen-art review of draft-ietf-medi… Scott Brim