Re: [MEDIACTRL] draft-ietf-mediactrl-mrb-02.txt

[Lorenzo Miniero <[e-mail]>]

Hi Gary,

some comments inline ([LM]).


On Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:35:43 -0500
"MUNSON, GARY A, ATTLABS" <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi Chris/Lorenzo/all,
> 
> The way I read your responses is that we agree to incorporate/reflect
> both (A) and (B) below in prior emails. (And again, to my thinking, this
> specification is powerful/flexible enough to support both, and to limit
> it only to (B) would be unnecessarily constraining and less useful.)
> 
> In which case, my overlay comments to Lorenzo's that were to my original
> comments (see Lorenzo's Dec. 24 email below) are:
> 
> 1) We need to explicitly state somewhere that we assume that the same
> SIP URI can be used to identify a given MS Resource for both control
> channel establishment and call leg establishment. 
>    [Because ... if not, then we have more work to do. For example, we
> don't want the AS to have to 'Query' the MRB for a control channel SIP
> URI and then have to come back to it again for the SIP URI for
> establishing call legs to it, or else we have to allow for two SIP URIs
> in the MRB response to the AS and indicate which is which.]
> 


[LM] As I said in reply to that mail, I think it's a very good idea to
envisage the possibility of having two SIP URIs, which can fallback to
one in case the MS doesn't make a distinction anyway. This would go in
both Publishing notifications and Consumer responses, of course.
Anyway, reading I have a little doubt: are you thinking of SIP URIs as
associated to the MS instances themselves, or to the requested
resources? The way the protocol works now is the former, i.e. what the
MS publishes (its address) goes in the Consumer response (the URI to
contact to get to that MS), so there's no new URI allocated to take
care of a specific Consumer request (since the MS is not aware of
Consumer requests anyway).


> 2) It would be helpful to state that nothing precludes an MS Resource
> from having a variety of capabilities (such as both some kinds of IVR
> and some kinds of conferencing) associated with the same SIP URI.
> 


[LM] From how I see it, this is actually what should always happen,
considering how the framework is conceived: no matter how the MS is
internally partitioned/built (e.g. a proprietary conferencing mixer
here, an IVR server there), the publicly reachable URI should be the
same, and every redirection should happen transparently to the AS,
which only has to know what the MS supports as a whole.


> 3) It should be stated that Query and In-Line IAMM or IUMM can be used
> without or without a control channel.
> 


[LM] Right, even though IMHO the focus should still be on the MEDIACTRL
framework (since it's a MEDIACTRL document and assumed to work within
its architecture). We can add some words stating that the MRB may also
act as a B2BUA/Proxy of some sort for media dialogs as well (especially
in IUMM, since in IAMM the AS may directly contact the MS for call
legs) or whenever simpler approaches are enough and no Control
Channel is needed (RFC4240, etc.).


> 3) It is important to further amplify on some of the ways, and some
> associated limitations, that this toolkit can be used, especially in two
> regards (maybe there's more?) - how MRB knows when resources are freed
> up, and how conferencing legs for the same conference all get to the
> same MS Resource.
> Whether this might best addressed in a new "Considerations on
> Approaches" section or sprinkled piecemeal in the existing text is
> editors' choice.
> But I think we want to make sure we fundamentally cover
>  a) For MRB to know when MS resources are freed up
>      - lease mechanism works for Query or IAMM
>      - leaving/having MRB in call leg signaling path works for IAMM and
> IUMM
>      - could also rely on status update info over Publish for any of
> Query, IAMM or IUMM
>     Left to implementation and context to decide what to do 
>       


[LM] Yes providing some guidance with respect to that definitely makes
sense. I'd also foster explicit release messages by the AS.


>   b) For conferencing to ensure that all the legs get to the same MS
> Resource
>          - For Query, AS knows SIP URI of MS resource, so can send all
> legs to same one
>          - Ditto for IAMM using MRB to establish the control channel,
> but send call legs directly to
>            the identified MS resource (not clear to me whether this also
> applies to IUMM)
>            SIP URI of the identified MS resource
>          - For IAMM and IUMM when sending call legs through MRB, one
> could rely on providing the conference ID in 
>            the SIP INVITEs
> 


[LM] The first two points only apply to Query and IAMM, since in both
cases the AS gets the MS SIP URI in the Consumer response. In IUMM
there's no Consumer interaction, and so everything has to be done
inline. The only way to cope with this in IUMM is to always use the
same MS for the same AS, in order to make redirections easier (MRB sends
call legs there as well), or envisage a pool of URIs in the MS each
statically associated with a different MS (just a rough idea of course).

In IAMM this is not as easy, since the same AS could issue different
Consumer requests at the same time, and end on different MS as a
consequence to those interactions. That's why I thought a direct
AS<->MS to be better in IAMM. Alternatively, in case in IAMM the MRB
*wants* to be on the signaling path for UAC calls as well, it may place
one of its own URIs in the Consumer response (i.e. in the media calls
URI) instead of the MS URI, so that a MRB-aware AS always sends calls
there. It would then be up to the MRB to associate that URI to the
right MS. Do you think such an approach would be ok?


>   c) If the MRB gets a SIP INVITE, how does it know whether to treat it
> in Query mode or IAMM mode? Presumably that would have to be a rule
> specified within MRB. Which could vary based on context, e.g., such as
> which application the request came from. 
> 


[LM] I'm not sure what you mean by this example: are you talking about
call legs to redirect? Because for what concerns the Control Channel
creation, in Query mode the MRB is not involved. The same can be said
for what concerns call legs basically, since in Query mode the AS sends
the calls directly to the MS as well (unless the MRB replaced the calls
URI with one of its own, in which case the MRB would still know the
mapping with the MS to contact).


>   d) This specification isn't exhaustive on considerations/limitations
> of approaches (e.g., what happens if you use IAMM initially for a
> control channel and then also send call leg requests through it - what's
> good and bad about that ...; or MRB maintaining sanity between what is
> deduces from requests wrt control SDP and requests wrt call leg SDP in
> In-Line mode)
> 
> (Side note: With In-Line, having MRB staying in the signaling path for
> call legs *can* be good. For IVR applications, that can be a
> straightforward, timely and efficient way for MRB to know when the
> requested MS resources are freed up.)
> 


[LM] You're right, some discussions about pros and cons could be nice
to have in the document.


> Thanks.
> 
> Cheers & Happy New Year!,
> 
> Gary
> 


[LM] Thanks for your feedback!

Lorenzo


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Chris Boulton [mailto:[e-mail]] 
> Sent: Monday, January 04, 2010 4:00 AM
> To: Lorenzo Miniero
> Cc: MUNSON, GARY A, ATTLABS; [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: [MEDIACTRL] draft-ietf-mediactrl-mrb-02.txt
> 
> Some additional comments in-line.
> 
> Chris.
> 
> >> Hi Lorenzo and folks,
> >>
> >> I was formulating responses to some of your specific
> >> replies below, but began to suspect that perhaps there's a
> >> single underlying issue that needs clearing up first
> >> regarding IAMM. Let me explain the way I see IAMM working.
> >>
> >> (A) The way I have been thinking: The AS sends an INVITE
> >> to MRB with (1) SDP characterizing the *call leg* it wants
> >> to send to an MS and (2) MS characteristics it wants for
> >> that call leg. MRB picks one and sends a modified INVITE
> >> along to the MS. When there is a response from the MS, MRB
> >> will insert toward the AS the SIP uri of the chosen MS,
> >> which can be used as the basis for the AS 'directly'
> >> establishing a control channel with the MS, or the AS
> >> knowing that it already has one.
> >>
> >> (B) Are you thinking instead that with IAMM the SDP is
> >> characterizing the control channel it wants? And then the
> >> AS has the opportunity to set up call legs 'directly' to
> >> the MS without the SIP signaling going through the MRB? I
> >> had not been thinking that, although treating these MRB
> >> interfaces as a toolkit, I could see that as a
> >> possibility.
> >>
> >>     
> [Chris] Agreed.  There is nothing stopping the MRB from inserting itself
> 
> into the signalling path of ALL signalling.  As you said, the toolkit 
> does not preclude that option.
> 
> >> It seems to me that we need to cover the way I had been
> >> thinking about it, because there's no necessity of a
> >> control channel between the AS and MS (e.g., AS could be
> >> happy using 4240 in a given situation). In addition one
> >> could use MRB a la (B), but it does raise some more
> >> questions - like how MRB knows when the MS resources are
> >> freed up.
> >>     
> >> Yes, the way we handle it ATM is (B). This was the choice
> >> considering the focus was actually on MEDIACTRL-aware
> >> entities, and as a consequence on the Control Channel
> >> itself. Besides, we'd rather not have the MRB on the
> >> signalling path the whole time, being its scope more that of
> >> a locator.
> >>     
> [Chris] Agreed.
> >> Anyway, I think we could also add some way to achieve the
> >> sort of behaviour you mentioned. I'm thinking of two
> >> possible approaches:
> >>
> >> 1) the AS places an INVITE with just the Consumer payload
> >> (no SDP) to the MRB, and gets the answer in the 200, also
> >> allowing for SIP just as an additional transport for the
> >> interface; this would allow the AS to deal with the creation
> >> of a control channel and redirection of call legs according
> >> to its business logic, exactly as in the Query mode;
> >>
> >> 2) or, in case we still mandate the multipart/mixed payload
> >> for the creation of the control channel in IAMM, we could
> >> envisage similar approaches when it comes to 4240-like
> >> scenarios; for a call leg, the AS adds a Consumer payload to
> >> the INVITE before sending it to the MRB (multipart/mixed but
> >> with a media SDP this time) which in turn makes use of the
> >> Consumer info to redirect the call to a specific MS.
> >>
> >> What do you think of it? Do you think they could cover the
> >> scenarios you had in mind?
> >>
> >>     
> [Chris] I need to think about it a little more BUT I am leaning towards 
> (2) as it provides consistency with using the SDP to identify the type 
> of connection that we are dealing with.  I am not against (1) so open to
> 
> suggestions.
> >> The MRB being aware of resources being freed up can be a
> >> concern, but it's the same for both Inline and Query mode.
> >> For that purpose, the lease mechanism can be exploited, or
> >> explicit release messages by the AS.
> >>
> >>     
> [Chris] Agreed.  The lease mechanism should be used regardless of the MS
> 
> trigger mechanism.  These are all good scenarios that we need to keep in
> 
> mind.
> 
> Chris.
> 
> >> Thanks,
> >> Lorenzo
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Lorenzo Miniero [mailto:[e-mail]] 
> >> Sent: Thursday, December 24, 2009 10:56 AM
> >> To: MUNSON, GARY A, ATTLABS
> >> Cc: Chris Boulton; [e-mail]
> >> Subject: Re: [MEDIACTRL] draft-ietf-mediactrl-mrb-02.txt
> >>
> >> Hi Gary,
> >>
> >> thanks a lot for your detailed feedback! We're glad you
> >> like how the doc is going on: hopefully, with the help of
> >> your comments, next doc will be almost ready to go.
> >>
> >> Some comments inline [LM]
> >>
> >> Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you as well!
> >>
> >> L.
> >>
> >>
> >> On Mon, 21 Dec 2009 20:56:07 -0500
> >> "MUNSON, GARY A, ATTLABS" <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >>
> >>     
> >>> Hi Chris and Lorenzo,
> >>>
> >>> Firstly, thank you very much for all your work on this
> >>> draft. Looking fairly complete!
> >>>
> >>> Below are comments from me. Unfortunately I won't be
> >>>       
> >> much help on sanity
> >>     
> >>> checking sections 6 and 7. Hopefully others will be.
> >>>
> >>> I'll be on vacation now through Jan. 1 and won't be
> >>> looking at email much, so no rush to react to my
> >>> comments. 
> >>> Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays/Happy New Year,
> >>>
> >>> br,
> >>>
> >>> Gary
> >>>
> >>> --- GAM Comments below ---
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>       
> >>>>> General comments below <<
> >>>>>           
> >>> 1) For In-line, how does the AS know the identity of the
> >>>       
> >> MS for purposes
> >>     
> >>> of 
> >>> establishing a mediactrl Control Channel to it? I don't
> >>> think this described anywhere, 
> >>> and it is an important point to cover conspicuously. (I
> >>> do see a sentence in the para 
> >>> after Figure 8 that seems to say at least for In-line an
> >>>       
> >> AS could send a
> >>     
> >>> Control dialog 
> >>> to MRB, so MRB would select a MS resource for that; but
> >>>       
> >> if so, it raises
> >>     
> >>> more questions 
> >>> for me, like which comes first, or how you guarantee
> >>> that a Control request and the 
> >>> corresponding call leg request end up at the same MS
> >>> resource.)  
> >>>       
> >> [LM] That's a good point, and Chris and I discussed while
> >> updating the doc. The Consumer interface now has, in the
> >> <response-session-info> element of a reply, the SIP URI of
> >> the MS that the MRB has chosen for the request. This means
> >> that, both in Query and IAMM mode, the AS has a way to
> >> directly contact the MS for what concerns that request
> >> (e.g. attaching UACs there). This solves the issue, but
> >> also removes the MRB from the signaling path, meaning it
> >> won't be able to infer resources being freed by itself
> >> (e.g. a UAC sending a BYE). In IUMM that becomes a problem
> >> , since the AS is not aware of a MRB, and just sees it as
> >> a MS. The only solution to this problem is to have the MRB
> >> always the same MS when the same AS uses IUMM. If you
> >> think these solutions are ok, we might add some text about
> >> them in the doc to provide some guidance. Otherwise, any
> >> comment (from you or from any other in the list of course)
> >> is more than welcome.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 2) For In-line, in the case of conferencing, how does
> >>> the MRB know to send legs of the 
> >>> same conference to the same MS resource? I would think
> >>> by remembering the conference ID 
> >>> supplied in the SIP for the first leg it sees. This
> >>>       
> >> should be described.
> >>     
> >>> (Not needed 
> >>> for Query MRB).
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] This can be seen as the same as 1). Or did you have
> >> something different in mind?
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 3) The required/optional aspect of attributes on the
> >>>       
> >> Consumer interface
> >>     
> >>> is absent in 
> >>> this draft. I had thought the conclusion of the last
> >>> meeting (IETF 76) was to include
> >>> it.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Yes, there was consensus in Hiroshima. Anyway, there
> >> also were some comments on the ML that raised a few
> >> concerns about this approach, specifically a post by Mark
> >> Syrett:
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> > http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/mediactrl/current/msg01433.html
> >   
> >> and the following posts. After that, the idea was that we
> >> first needed to better investigate pros and cons of such
> >> an approach, considering it could be considered harmful. I
> >> guess it would be a good idea to keep on discussing about
> >> this on the ML and update the doc accordingly. At the
> >> moment, the important thing to have was a more or less
> >> complete Consumer Interface per se: now that we have it,
> >> we can shape and improve it.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>>>> Specific sections comments below <<
> >>>>>           
> >>> 1) Section 1 Intro 1st paragraph. Say "selection"
> >>>       
> >> instead of "location".
> >>     
> >>>   > Because generally location is taken to mean actual
> >>>       
> >> location in some
> >>     
> >>> sense, which 
> >>> isn't what is intended here.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Thanks, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 2) Section 1 Intro, para above Figure 3, add words ...
> >>> "In this model there are a 
> >>> number (greater than 1) of application servers *,
> >>> possibly supporting dissimilar 
> >>> applications,* controlling a single media server."
> >>>
> >>>   > Because while the draft acknowledges MS resources
> >>> are not necessarily homogeneous, 
> >>> nowhere does it yet say likewise for applications/ASes,
> >>> and that's an important point.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] I agree, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 3) In Abstract and Section 1, instead of "1:M and M:M"
> >>> say either "1:Many and 
> >>> Many:Many" or "1:M and M:N"
> >>>
> >>>   > Because implication is generally that M stands for
> >>> an arbitrary number, but then 
> >>> M:M would imply same number of AS and MS, which we don't
> >>> mean. 
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Thanks, that was proably a typo, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 4) Section 2, Media Resource Broker MRB term. Change
> >>> description to  
> >>>     A logical entity that is responsible for
> >>>       both collection of appropriate published Media
> >>>       Server (MS) information and selecting appropriate
> >>>       MS resources on behalf of consuming entities.
> >>>
> >>>   > Because the current description says "... and
> >>>       
> >> supplying appropriate
> >>     
> >>> MS information 
> >>> to consuming entities", which is isn't really to the
> >>>       
> >> point at least for
> >>     
> >>> In-Line use.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] You're right, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 5) Section 2, Query MRB, change "location" to "address"
> >>>
> >>>   > Because 'location' is tended to mean actual location
> >>> as in presence/location and/or 
> >>> as in media-server-location
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Thanks, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 6) Section 2, In-line MRB, change description to 
> >>>    
> >>>     An instantiation of an MRB (See definition) that
> >>>       directly receives requests on the signalling path.
> >>> There is no separate query.
> >>>
> >>>   > Because present description says "decision making
> >>>       
> >> process is totally
> >>     
> >>> delegated to 
> >>> the MRB" which a good characterization because (a) even
> >>> for Query MRB, it's the MRB that 
> >>> decides/picks an MS resource and (b) the AS can provide
> >>>       
> >> the same kind of
> >>     
> >>> information 
> >>> with IAMM In-line as for Query.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Actually, as you say in IAMM the query is still there
> >> , even if it's part of the INVITE (the multipart/mixed
> >> payload). Do you think just clarifying that the HTTP
> >> interface is not involved will be enough?
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 7) Section 3, para 3, say "selection decisions" instead
> >>> of "routing decisions".
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Thanks, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 8) Section 4, para 4. Revise that para to
> >>>
> >>>   Please note that there may be additional information
> >>> that it is desirable for the MRB 
> >>> to have for purposes of selecting an MS resource, such
> >>> as resource allocation rules 
> >>> across different applications, planned or
> >>>    unplanned downtime of Media Server resources, the
> >>>       
> >> planned addition of
> >>     
> >>>    future Media Server resources, or MS resource
> >>> capacity models. How the MRB acquires 
> >>> such information is outside the scope of this document.
> >>>
> >>>   > Because the real point is that there are additional
> >>> things the MRB might want to 
> >>> know about MS resources to factor into its decision
> >>>       
> >> making process. It's
> >>     
> >>> not about what 
> >>> else the AS might want to know.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Good point, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 9) Section 4.1. At the very end of the section, last
> >>>       
> >> paragraph, add the
> >>     
> >>> sentence 
> >>> "Additionally, with Query MRB, the MRB is not in the
> >>> signaling path between the AS and 
> >>> the selected MS resource."
> >>>
> >>>   > Because this is a useful distinction between Query
> >>> and In-line to highlight.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] If we take into account the possible solution
> >> proposed in 1), this also does not apply in IAMM mode,
> >> since the AS would be aware of the MS that was chosen. At
> >> least, that's true for UAC calls to proxy, while it's also
> >> true that in the IAMM case the MRB will be in the path for
> >> the Control Channel SIP dialog.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 9a) Section 4.2, first para, revise to
> >>>
> >>>    The "In-line" MRB is architecturally different from
> >>>       
> >> the "Query" model
> >>     
> >>>    that was discussed in the previous section.  The
> >>> Concept of a separate "Media
> >>>    Server Consumer Interface" disappears.  The client of
> >>>       
> >> the MRB simply
> >>     
> >>>    uses the media server control and media dialog
> >>>       
> >> signalling to involve
> >>     
> >>> the MRB.  This  
> >>>   type of deployment is illustrated in Figure 8.
> >>>
> >>>   > Because the current para talks about offloading the
> >>>       
> >> decision making
> >>     
> >>> process, but 
> >>> that's the MRB role for Query or In-line, so isn't a
> >>>       
> >> distinction. (Also,
> >>     
> >>> it's Media 
> >>> Resource Consumer Interface, not Media Server Consumer
> >>>  Interface.) 
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Thanks, noted.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 10) Section 4.2, the two paragraphs below Figure 8.
> >>> Revise what is currently there to
> >>>
> >>>    The Media Servers still use the 'Media Server
> >>>    Publishing Interface' to convey capabilities and
> >>>    resources to the MRB - as illustrated by (1).  The
> >>>       
> >> media server Control and Media dialogs are sent to the MRB
> >>     
> >>>    (2) which then selects an appropriate Media Server
> >>>       
> >> (3) and would stay
> >>     
> >>> in the 
> >>> signaling path between the AS and the MS resource for
> >>> those dialogs. 
> >>>   In-line MRB can be split into two distinct logical
> >>>       
> >> roles which can be
> >>     
> >>>    applied on a per request basis.  They are:
> >>>
> >>>    In-line Unaware MRB Mode (IUMM):  Allows an MRB to
> >>>       act on behalf of clients requiring media services
> >>>       who are not aware of an MRB or its operation. In
> >>> this case the AS does not provide explicit information
> >>>       on the kind of MS resource it needs (as in Section
> >>> 5.2) and the MRB is left to deduce it
> >>>       by potentially inspecting other information in the
> >>> request from the AS; for 
> >>>       example, SDP content, or 
> >>>       address of the requesting AS, or additional
> >>>       
> >> Request-URI parameters
> >>     
> >>> as per RFC 4240.
> >>>
> >>>    In-line Aware MRB Mode (IAMM):  Allows an MRB to act
> >>>       on behalf of clients requiring media services who
> >>>       are aware of an MRB and its operation. In
> >>>       
> >> particular it allows the AS to explicitly the convey
> >>     
> >>> the same kinds of MS 
> >>>       characteristics desired as does the Query MRB mode
> >>>       
> >> (as in Section
> >>     
> >>> 5.2).
> >>>
> >>>    In either role, the MRB would deduce that the
> >>> selected MS resources are no longer 
> >>> needed when the AS terminates the corresponding dialog.
> >>>
> >>>   > Because some of the current description in the first
> >>> of the paragraph really only 
> >>> applies to IUMM and not IAMM - i.e., about what the MRB
> >>>     knows;  and because the "decision making" on MS
> >>>       
> >> resource selection is always
> >>     
> >>> the role of 
> >>> the MRB whether for Query or either flavor of In-line.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Same as before, if an AS using the IAMM mode directly
> >> contacts the chosen MS when it comes to forwarding UAC
> >> calls, then the MRB won't always be on the signaling path
> >> (it will for the control channel, it won't for UAC). Or
> >> when you say "the MRB would deduce that the selected MS
> >> resources are no longer needed when the AS terminates the
> >> corresponding dialog" you actually mean the Control
> >> Channel SIP dialog and not any UAC dialog?
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 11) Section 5.1, para 2, revise it to
> >>>
> >>>    As already anticipated in the introduction, the MRB
> >>>    view of MS resource availability will in practice be
> >>> approximate - i.e., partial and 
> >>> imperfect. The MRB Publish interface does not provide an
> >>>    exhaustive view of current MS resource consumption,
> >>> the MS may in some cases provide a 
> >>> best-effort computed view of resource consumption 
> >>>    parameters conveyed in the Publish interface (e.g.,
> >>> DSP's with a fixed number of 
> >>> streams versus GPU's with CPU
> >>>    availability), there may be licensing constraints not
> >>> factored in (e.g., even if 
> >>> lots of CPU and memory
> >>>    are available, licensing or other configuration
> >>>       
> >> elements may restrict
> >>     
> >>>    the number of stream types), and MS resource
> >>>       
> >> information may only be
> >>     
> >>> reported 
> >>> periodically over the Publish interface to MRB. 
> >>>    Nevertheless, despite such limitations and with the
> >>> aid of good engineering the MRB 
> >>> can still perform its function well.
> >>>
> >>>   > Because - seemed could benefit from better wording.
> >>>       
> >> I disagree about
> >>     
> >>> the part that 
> >>> the only way an AS could be guaranteed of a specific
> >>> resource is "to reserve it by 
> >>> establishing a session" ... even that doesn't absolutely
> >>> guarantee the entire desired 
> >>> set of resources will be available when needed. And
> >>> seemed good to add some words to the 
> >>> effect that despite the MRB's approximate view, it can
> >>> still do a good job. And I 
> >>> didn't think that the observation about reporting of
> >>> resource availability versus 
> >>> predictive resource allocation was relevant or helpful
> >>> to the primary theme of this 
> >>> paragraph.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] You're right, and I agree that the paragraph did
> >> benefit from the rewording. The "reserve the resource to
> >> be sure you have it" came from face-to-face discussions,
> >> and that's why we added it to the text.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 12) Section 5.1, para 3.  I think this para (copied
> >>> below as currently written for the 
> >>> reader's convenience here) needs some clarification, but
> >>>       
> >> I don't have a
> >>     
> >>> specific 
> >>> proposal because I'm not sure what the intent is. If the
> >>> intent is to say that ASes can 
> >>> figure out information on MS resource utilization by in
> >>> effect making queries of MRB, I 
> >>> would argue that is exceedingly awkward and limited, and
> >>> not worth mentioning. Or if 
> >>> ASes are thought of as hostile, I would worry about
> >>> worse things like requesting 
> >>> resources they don't need, and thereby tying them up
> >>>       
> >> from MRB's point of
> >>     
> >>> view. If the 
> >>> intent is that given the use of the Publish interface
> >>> there is the possibility of some 
> >>> interloper entity other than MRB of using the interface
> >>>       
> >> and finding out
> >>     
> >>> stuff, then the 
> >>> para should be clarified in that direction.
> >>>
> >>>    It is also worth noting that, while the scope of the
> >>>    MRB is definitely on providing interested Application
> >>>    Servers with the available resources, the MRB also
> >>>    allows for the retrieval of information about the
> >>>       
> >> currently occupied resources.  While this is of
> >>     
> >>>    course a relevant piece of information (e.g. for
> >>>    monitoring purposes), such a functionality inevitably
> >>>    raises security considerations, and implementations
> >>>    should take this into account. See Section 8 for more
> >>> details. 
> >>>       
> >> [LM] This is related to th security considerations in both
> >> the IVR and Mixer drafts. In fact, in both of the drafts
> >> the auditing interface allows for the probing of
> >> package-specific identifiers (e.g. conference and dialog
> >> IDs, and the like), which means, for instance, that an
> >> unauthorized AS could tear down a dialog another AS
> >> allocated. The security considerations there provide some
> >> guidance with respect to that, which should also apply in
> >> the MRB draft for the same reason (since, for intance, we
> >> report conference IDs in publish responses).
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 13) 5.2.2, first bullet under 2nd para - I don't
> >>> understand why the application/sdp 
> >>> part is needed.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] In IAMM, the AS adds both an SDP (to create a new CFW
> >> control channel) and a MRB Consumer request (to ask for a
> >> capable MS). According to the MRB request, the MRB chooses
> >> a MS, and forwards an INVITE there by attaching the SDP
> >> from the AS. The MS negotiates the control channel
> >> creation by replying with its own SDP. The MRB at this
> >> point can send a 200 back to the AS with a new
> >> multipart/mixed payload, including both the SDP from the
> >> chosen MS, and the MRB response to the original request.
> >> The AS can now connect to the MS using the SDP info.
> >>
> >> We prepared some examples for all the modes, I guess that
> >> this will be clearer when I'll send them to the list, but
> >> that's basically the procedure.
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 14) 5.2.3 bullet on <action> part about "If the
> >>>       
> >> information is identical
> >>     
> >>> as the 
> >>> existing request, the MRB will attempt a session
> >>> refresh." What does that mean? Needs 
> >>> clarification.
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] We'll reword that so that it makes more sense.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 15) 5.2.5.1.1, part about expires:,  "If the lease is
> >>> refreshed before expiry, the MRB 
> >>> will re-claim the resources and they will
> >>>       no longer be guaranteed."  --  I think this is
> >>> meant to say "If the lease is NOT 
> >>> refreshed ..." ?
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] Yes, that was a typo, thanks for finding it.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 16) 5.2.5.1.1, Editor's note at end of section as to
> >>>       
> >> whether the SIP URI
> >>     
> >>> is sufficient, 
> >>> I don't have any ideas about what else is needed, so
> >>> have nothing to suggest, other 
> >>> than to ask whether this single SIP URI is one and the
> >>>       
> >> same for sending
> >>     
> >>> call legs to 
> >>> the MS and for establishing a control channel?
> >>> Practically, is there some value in 
> >>> allowing for separate URIs for those purposes?
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] That's a very good point, and I definitely think it
> >> should be in the document. I guess these two URIs will be
> >> enough, unless anyone else sees any value in having
> >> others.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 17) Section 5.3.1, very last sentence, " The techniques
> >>> used for selecting an    
> >>> appropriate Media Server by an MRB acting in IUMM is
> >>> outside the scope of this document."  - I would think
> >>> this  statement applies to any kind of MRB, so should be
> >>> generalized and placed further up 
> >>> front in the document, perhaps the beginning part of
> >>> Section 3. 
> >>>       
> >> [LM] You're right, but I think it's also safer to make it
> >> clear that in IUMM mode you're more into the wild than in
> >> IAMM/Query. We'll reword the text to take your comment
> >> into account.
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>> 18) Section 5.3.2 on IAMM. I would think that there are
> >>>       
> >> a few items from
> >>     
> >>> the Consumer 
> >>> interface that don't apply to the IAMM case. Or if they
> >>>       
> >> are used, then I
> >>     
> >>> think need 
> >>> more description (I at least wouldn't be clear on just
> >>> how they would get used without 
> >>> getting into problems). Specifically, 
> >>>   - the ability to update/change a prior resource
> >>>   request - the ability to ask for multiple ports (in so
> >>>       
> >> many words) at least in
> >>     
> >>> the IVR case
> >>>   - does the lease mechanism apply? is the client
> >>>       
> >> required to renew? MRB
> >>     
> >>> knows the call 
> >>> is still up if it's in the signaling path
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] I'd rather have some redundancy here than making
> >> distinctions for what concerns the Consumer interface
> >> according to the protocol it is conveyed upon. Do you
> >> think it's ok if we just point out that in IAMM mode you
> >> have more ways to do the same thing? (leasing being one of
> >> the best examples)
> >>
> >>
> >>     
> >>>>> Editorial nits below <<
> >>>>>           
> >>> 1) Be consistent of use of MRB Publish interface or MRB
> >>> Publishing interface.
> >>>
> >>> 2) 5.1.1.2 para 3,  "updating/removing" instead of
> >>> "update/remove" 
> >>> 3) 5.1.4.4 "which represents" instead of 'which
> >>> representing" 
> >>> 4) 5.1.4.5 "number of RTP sessions' instead of "number
> >>> of RTP session" 
> >>> 5) 5.1.4.6 "which represents" instead of 'which
> >>> representing" 
> >>> 6) 5.1.4.11 "can" instead of "cane"
> >>>
> >>> 7) 5.1.3.14 "media server supports." instead of 'media
> >>>       
> >> server support."
> >>     
> >>> 8) 5.1.3.19 "... a blue or green one." instead of "... a
> >>>       
> >> blue or green."
> >>     
> >>> 9) 5.2.3  "in Section 7 and Section 7" --> "in Section
> >>> 5.2 and Section 7"  ?
> >>>
> >>> 10) 5.2.4.1.1.1 under seq:  "information its use" -->
> >>>       
> >> "information about
> >>     
> >>> its use"
> >>>
> >>> 11) 5.2.5.1.1, under expires: "that the media resources
> >>> reserved" --> "that the media resources are reserved"
> >>>
> >>>       
> >> [LM] All noted, thanks.
> >>
> >> -- 
> >> Lorenzo Miniero <[e-mail]>
> >>     
> >
> >
> > Lorenzo Miniero
> > http://www.meetecho.com
> >
> >   
> 
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