Re: [MEXT] [mext] #6: Minor editorial corrections and updates
"Charles E. Perkins" <charles.perkins@earthlink.net> Fri, 27 June 2008 21:19 UTC
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Subject: Re: [MEXT] [mext] #6: Minor editorial corrections and updates
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Hello folks, I've created issue #6; see http://www3.tools.ietf.org/wg/mext/trac/ticket/6 I recommend accepting the proposed changes in rfc3775bis-01. Regards, Charlie P. mext wrote: > Ticket #6: Minor editorial corrections and updates > > Submitted by Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>: > > Since the publication of RFC 3775, several of the references have > progressed, have been republished, etc. > > ---- > > Section 9.3.2 (keyword capitalization): > > OLD: > However, the sending node MUST not do this in the following cases: > > NEW: > However, the sending node MUST NOT do this in the following cases: > > ---- > > Section 10.4.2 (missing paranthesis): > OLD: > Multicast packets addressed to a multicast address with > a scope larger than link-local, but smaller than global (e.g., site- > local and organization-local [3], to which the mobile node is > subscribed, SHOULD NOT be tunneled to the mobile node. > > NEW: > Multicast packets addressed to a multicast address with > a scope larger than link-local, but smaller than global (e.g., site- > local and organization-local [3]), to which the mobile node is > subscribed, SHOULD NOT be tunneled to the mobile node. > > ---- > > Section 10.6.4 (keyword capitalization): > OLD: > As described in Section 10.3.1, the lifetime returned by the home > agent in a Binding Acknowledgement MUST not be greater than the > remaining valid lifetime for the subnet prefix in the mobile node's > home address. > > NEW: > As described in Section 10.3.1, the lifetime returned by the home > agent in a Binding Acknowledgement MUST NOT be greater than the > remaining valid lifetime for the subnet prefix in the mobile node's > home address. > > ---- > > Section 11.7.3 (keyword capitalization): > OLD: > o The Binding Authorization Data mobility option, if present, MUST > be the last option and MUST not have trailing padding. > > NEW: > o The Binding Authorization Data mobility option, if present, MUST > be the last option and MUST NOT have trailing padding. > > ---- > > Reference updates as follows: > > RFC 1750 => RFC 4086[[BR]] > > RFC 3513 => RFC 4291[[BR]] > > RFC 2424 => RFC 5226[[BR]] > > RFC 2461 => RFC 4861[[BR]] > > RFC 2462 => RFC 4862[[BR]] > > RFC 2463 => RFC 4443[[BR]] > > RFC 3041 => RFC 4941[[BR]] > > draft-bellovin-mandate-keymgmt-00 => RFC 4107[[BR]] > > draft-ietf-ipsec-ikev2-07 => RFC 4306[[BR]] > > draft-nikander-mobileip-v6-ro-sec-00 => RFC 4225[[BR]] > > > ----------------------------------------+----------------------------------- > Reporter: charliep@computer.org | Owner: charliep@computer.org > Type: defect | Status: new > Priority: minor | Milestone: > Component: draft-ietf-mext-rfc3775bis | Version: > Severity: Active WG Document | Keywords: > ----------------------------------------+----------------------------------- _______________________________________________ MEXT mailing list MEXT@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mext