[MIB-DOCTORS] RE: MIB Doctor review: Reference checks: draft-ietf-ipsp-ipsecaction-mib-02.txt

"Wijnen, Bert \(Bert\)" <bwijnen@alcatel-lucent.com> Wed, 03 January 2007 13:35 UTC

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Further, I did a reference check:

!! Missing Reference for citation: [rfc2578]
  P004 L037:                                             -- [rfc2578]

!! Missing Reference for citation: [rfc2579]
  P004 L042:                                             -- [rfc2579]

!! Missing Reference for citation: [rfc2580]
  P004 L046:                                             -- [rfc2580]

!! Missing Reference for citation: [rfc3289]
  P005 L012:                                             -- [rfc3289]

!! Missing Reference for citation: [rfc3411]
  P004 L049:                                             -- [rfc3411]

!! Missing Reference for citation: [rfc4001]
  P004 L053:                                             -- [rfc4001]

!! Missing Reference for citation: [rfcZZZZ]
  P005 L008:                                             -- [rfcZZZZ]

probably all caused by the fact that in the references section you use
capitals for RFC. 

More review later
Bert

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