[mile] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7970 (6177)

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Subject: [mile] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7970 (6177)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7970,
"The Incident Object Description Exchange Format Version 2".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6177

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Type: Technical
Reported by: François Poirotte <fpoirotte@gmail.com>

Section: 3.26

Original Text
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3.26.  HashData Class

   The HashData class describes different types of hashes on a given
   object (e.g., file, part of a file, email).

   +--------------------------+
   | HashData                 |
   +--------------------------+
   | ENUM scope               |<>--{0..1}--[ HashTargetID ]
   |                          |<>--{0..*}--[ Hash         ]
   |                          |<>--{0..*}--[ FuzzyHash    ]
   +--------------------------+

                       Figure 54: The HashData Class

Corrected Text
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3.26.  HashData Class

   The HashData class describes different types of hashes on a given
   object (e.g., file, part of a file, email).

   +--------------------------+
   | HashData                 |
   +--------------------------+
   | ENUM scope               |<>--{0..1}--[ HashTargetID ]
   | STRING ext-scope         |<>--{0..*}--[ Hash         ]
   |                          |<>--{0..*}--[ FuzzyHash    ]
   +--------------------------+

                       Figure 54: The HashData Class

Notes
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Both the main body inside section 3.26 & the XML schema in section 8 mention "ext-scope" as a valid attribute of the HashData class, but the attribute was missing from the UML diagram in section 3.26.

(The attribute is necessary so that the "scope" attribute of HashData can be extended using the principles edicted in section 5.1.1)

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RFC7970 (draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-26)
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Title               : The Incident Object Description Exchange Format Version 2
Publication Date    : November 2016
Author(s)           : R. Danyliw
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Managed Incident Lightweight Exchange
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG