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Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-10.txt

"Takeshi Takahashi" <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp> Mon, 04 November 2013 06:06 UTC

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Hello all,

The new revision was uploaded.

The revision reflected the comments from
1. IANA reviewer ([IANA #715653])
2. Gen-Art reviewer
(http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg09173.html)
3. IESG review
(https://datatracker.ietf.org/submit/status/55485/6635f5b88c13eceb573a8d377a
73840b/)

For each of above items, the following changes were done.
1. Section 7 (IANA consideration) were modified (sentences were refined)
2. Section 7 (IANA consideration), reference section, and several editorial
issues were modified
3. Section 4 was modified (duplicated sentences were removed)

Thank you very much for everyone's kind assistance.

Best regards,
Take



> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-sci-10.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Managed Incident Lightweight Exchange
> Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title           : IODEF-extension for structured cybersecurity
> information
> 	Author(s)       : Takeshi Takahashi
>                           Kent Landfield
>                           Thomas Millar
>                           Youki Kadobayashi
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-mile-sci-10.txt
> 	Pages           : 28
> 	Date            : 2013-11-03
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document extends the Incident Object Description Exchange Format
>    (IODEF) defined in RFC 5070 [RFC5070] to exchange enriched
>    cybersecurity information among cybersecurity entities and facilitate
>    their operations.  It provides the capability of embedding structured
>    information, such as identifier- and XML-based information.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-sci
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mile-sci-10
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mile-sci-10
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