[mile] Joel Jaeggli's No Objection on draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [mile] Joel Jaeggli's No Objection on draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09: (with COMMENT)
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Joel Jaeggli has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-implementreport/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Nevile Brownlee performed the opsdir review. I don't think the draft is entirely ready to publish and I hope some editing will ensue but I that in the hands of shepherd, and responsible AD. Hi all: I have performed an Operations Directorate review of draft-ietf-mile-implementreport-09 "This document is a collection of implementation reports from vendors, consortiums, and researchers who have implemented one or more of the standards published from the IETF INCident Handling (INCH) and Management Incident Lightweight Exchange (MILE) working groups." This draft is a collection of information about Security Incident reporting protocols, and the implementation of systems that use them to share such information. It is simply a collection of information, it makes no attempt to compare the various standards or implementations. As such, it will be of interest to Network Operators who wish to collect and share such data. Operationally, Operators would need to decide which incident data collection group they want to be part of, that choice will strongly influence their choice of reporting protocol and applications to gather and distribute the data. The draft seems (to me) to need quite a bit of copy-editing, I list a few changes and suggestions below ... S1 RFC5070-bis. Is there an Internet Draft about this, or some other document you could reference? It's mentioned again in section 3.1, but there's nothing about it in the References section. S2.1 s/provides a solutions/provides solutions/ S2.3 s/IODEF formatted-message to/IODEF formatted-messages to/ s/by REN-ISAC are designed/by REN-ISAC is designed/ S3.2 "IODEF-SCI is the IETF draft" there's no reference to such a draft, there should be. "It also equips the interface ..." Exactly what does this mean? S4.2.2 s/prevents from accidentally/prevents accidentally/ s/ensure it is a well formed format/ ensure it is well formed/ S5.1 "General availability of Threat Central will be in 2014." It's now well into 2016 - this needs updating! Overall, I think the material in this draft is interesting, but it needs quite a bit of tidying/updating to get it ready for publishing. Cheers, Nevil -- --------------------------------------------------------------------- Nevil Brownlee Computer Science Department Phone: +64 9 373 7599 x88941 The University of Auckland FAX: +64 9 373 7453 Private Bag 92019, Auckland 1142, New Zealand _______________________________________________ OPS-DIR mailing list OPS-DIR@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ops-dir
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