[mile] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10: (with COMMENT)

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 30 August 2017 10:19 UTC

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Subject: [mile] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10: (with COMMENT)
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Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mile-iodef-guidance-10: No Objection

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I noted the exact same point as Ben regarding the intended status.
This is really a BCP, right? https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2026#section-5
However, I believe the combination of BCP and RFC2119 language is fine.
If I take a single sentence, as an example:

   An IODEF document MUST include
   at least an Incident class, an xml:lang attribute that defines the
   supported language an the IODEF version attribute.

Is this a specification coming from RFC 7970 (which I could not find, by
browsing for a few minutes)? Or is this is a new specification of this "BCP"?

See also Qin's OPS DIR feedback.