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Re: [MLS] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-10

Benjamin Beurdouche <ietf@beurdouche.com> Mon, 16 January 2023 07:31 UTC

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From: Benjamin Beurdouche <ietf@beurdouche.com>
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Date: Mon, 16 Jan 2023 08:31:27 +0100
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Subject: Re: [MLS] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-10
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Hi Yoav,

Thanks for the review. I guess we have missed those, I’ll double check and fix that.

Best,
Benjamin

> On 15 Jan 2023, at 22:31, Yoav Nir via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Yoav Nir
> Review result: Has Nits
> 
> I have previously done an early review of version -09 of this draft.
> 
> At the time I was impressed by the breadth and depth of the security
> considerations but found a few nits.
> 
> In version -10, the breadth and depth are still there with that section taking
> no fewer than 18 pages in the text version. Unfortunately, the nits are also
> still present.

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