Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-t140-usage-data-channel-06 - Roni's review

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Thu, 03 October 2019 09:41 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: "Roni Even (A)" <roni.even@huawei.com>, "mmusic (mmusic@ietf.org)" <mmusic@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-t140-usage-data-channel-06 - Roni's review
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Hi Roni,

Thank You for the review! Please see inline.

> I reviewed the draft and have no comments.
>
> I am wondering what does it mean if the there is no language specified in the offer?

There are no hlang-send and hlang-recv attributes in the offer.

Perhaps the text could say:

“No preference for the language to be used for the real-time text conversation is indicated.”


>One nit: in section 4.2.3.1.1 “the offerer can start to send T.140 data as soon” change to “the offerer can start sending T.140 data as soon”



Will fix as suggested.



Regards,



Christer


From: mmusic [mailto:mmusic-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bo Burman
Sent: Wednesday, October 02, 2019 4:25 PM
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Subject: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-t140-usage-data-channel-06

Greetings MMUSIC ,

This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft:

    https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-mmusic-t140-usage-data-channel-06.txt<https://protect2.fireeye.com/url?k=25f42a9f-797df190-25f46a04-0cc47ad93e1a-a09083f6ef726742&q=1&u=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-mmusic-t140-usage-data-channel-06.txt>

as Proposed Standard. Please review and provide any comments you may have on the document by Wednesday, October 16, 2019. Comments should be sent to the document authors and the MMUSIC WG list. If you review the document but do not have any comments, please send a note to that effect as well.

Thanks,

/Bo
(MMUSIC co-chair)