Re: [MMUSIC] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-14.txt - Comment on subprotocol specifications

[Roni Even <[e-mail]>]

Hi Christer,
This sentence is partially correct, I will change based on your proposed text but mention that MSRP usage is in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-07 with informative reference.
Roni

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: יום ב 04 דצמבר 2017 15:34
> To: Roni Even; [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-
> sdpneg-14.txt - Comment on subprotocol specifications
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Section 1 says:
> 
>    "Procedures specific to each subprotocol such as MSRP are documented
> elsewhere."
> 
> 
> I think we should say “would have to be documented elsewhere”, because
> we don’t know whether they will be.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Christer
> 
> 
> 
> On 04/12/17 08:07, "mmusic on behalf of Roni Even"
> <[e-mail] on behalf of [e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> >Hi,
> >
> >This new revision addresses all nits pointed out by the idnits tool.
> >As a new editor, I looked at the MMUSIC mail archive and as far as I
> >can tell there were no open issues from the list.
> >
> >Thanks
> >Roni Even
> >
> >
> >-----Original Message-----
> >From: mmusic [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf Of
> >[e-mail]
> >Sent: יום א 03 דצמבר 2017 18:28
> >To: [e-mail]
> >Cc: [e-mail]
> >Subject: [MMUSIC] I-D Action:
> >draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-14.txt
> >
> >
> >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> >directories.
> >This draft is a work item of the Multiparty Multimedia Session Control
> >WG of the IETF.
> >
> >        Title           : SDP-based Data Channel Negotiation
> >        Authors         : Keith Drage
> >                          Maridi R. Makaraju
> >                          Juergen Stoetzer-Bradler
> >                          Richard Ejzak
> >                          Jerome Marcon
> >                          Roni Even
> >	Filename        : draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-14.txt
> >	Pages           : 41
> >	Date            : 2017-12-03
> >
> >Abstract:
> >   The Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers (RTCWeb) working group
> is
> >   charged to provide protocols to support direct interactive rich
> >   communications using audio, video, and data between two peers' web-
> >   browsers.  For the support of data communication, the RTCWeb working
> >   group has in particular defined the concept of bi-directional data
> >   channels over SCTP (Stream Control Transmission Protocol), where each
> >   data channel might be used to transport other protocols, called
> >   subprotocols.  Data channel setup can be done using either the in-
> >   band Data Channel Establishment Protocol (DCEP) or using some out-of-
> >   band non-DCEP protocol.  This document specifies how the SDP (Session
> >   Description Protocol) offer/answer exchange can be used to achieve
> >   such an out-of-band non-DCEP negotiation.  Even though data channels
> >   are designed for RTCWeb use initially, they may be used by other
> >   protocols like, but not limited to, the CLUE protocol (which is
> >   defined by the IETF "ControLling mUltiple streams for tElepresence"
> >   working group).  This document is intended to be used wherever data
> >   channels are used.
> >
> >
> >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg/
> >
> >There are also htmlized versions available at:
> >https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-14
> >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sd
> >pne
> >g-14
> >
> >A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg
> >-14
> >
> >
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