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Re: [MMUSIC] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 06 August 2019 16:00 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36
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Stewart, thanks for your review. I entered a DISCUSS ballot to check on the obsoleted references to RFC 4091 and RFC 4092.

Alissa

> On Jun 17, 2019, at 6:05 AM, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2019-06-17
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-20
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This is very much a review by a non-specialist. The document is well
> written, but has a small number of nits that need looking at before publication.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> ID-Nits points out the following:
>  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4091
>     (Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
>  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4092
>     (Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
>> From the text it looks like the updated RFC should be the reference that this
> memo uses.
> 
> ====
> The following abbreviations are not in the RFC Editor's well known list and
> should be expanded on first use:
>    STUN
>    SDP
>    FQDN
>    PSTN
> 
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