[MMUSIC] comment on section 6.4 of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-simulcast-06

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 02 November 2016 11:54 UTC

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Subject: [MMUSIC] comment on section 6.4 of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-simulcast-06
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Hi,

The current text is

 

Note: It may not be beneficial for declarative use to be limited  to a
single media source per "m=" line, as elaborated further in  Section 9
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-simulcast-06#section-9> .

 

I think that the note should say

 

Note: It may not be beneficial for declarative use to be limited  to a
single "m=" line per a media source, as elaborated further in  Section 9
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-simulcast-06#section-9> .
 
Roni