Re: [MMUSIC] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt

Paul Kyzivat <paul.kyzivat@comcast.net> Thu, 29 June 2017 16:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt
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On 6/29/17 5:02 AM, Ali C. Begen wrote:
> Hi everyone
> 
> This fixes Paul's and Gunnar's comments.

I ran this abnf through bap for a formal check and found a couple of things:

1) The definition of media-description still references bandwidth-fields 
rather than bandwidth-field.

2) The definition of key-type is not right - it seems to have lost a lot 
in the process of adopting the %s notation. To preserve compatibility 
with 4566 it should be:

    key-type =            %s"prompt" /
                          %s"clear:" text  /
                          %s"base64:" base64 /
                          %s"uri:" uri


Otherwise looks good to me.

	Thanks,
	Paul

> -acbegen
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> From: ** <internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>>
> Date: Thu, Jun 29, 2017 at 12:00 PM
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt
> To: Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org <mailto:csp@csperkins.org>>, Mark 
> Handley <m.handley@cs.ucl.ac.uk <mailto:m.handley@cs.ucl.ac.uk>>, Ali 
> Begen <ali.begen@networked.media>ia>, Van Jacobson <van@parc.com 
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> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Ali Begen and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> 
> Name:           draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis
> Revision:       21
> Title:          SDP: Session Description Protocol
> Document date:  2017-06-29
> Group:          mmusic
> Pages:          61
> URL: 
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt 
> <https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt>
> Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis/ 
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> <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21>
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> Abstract:
>     This memo defines the Session Description Protocol (SDP).  SDP is
>     intended for describing multimedia sessions for the purposes of
>     session announcement, session invitation, and other forms of
>     multimedia session initiation.  This document obsoletes RFC 4566.
> 
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