Re: [MMUSIC] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-51: (with COMMENT)

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Tue, 22 May 2018 06:47 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-51: (with COMMENT)
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Hi,

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>>>>>   [Section 7.3.1] as the answerer tagged "m=" section.  In the answer
>>>>>   the answerer BUNDLE-tag indicates the answerer tagged "m=" section.
>>>>>
>>>>> I'm having trouble reading this paragraph. How do you select an m= section that correspond to the selected m= section.
>>>>
>>>> The n:th m- line in an answer corresponds to the n:th m- line in the offer.
>>>>
>>>> There was some discussion about the terminology, and “corresponds” was the outcome.
>>>> 
>>>> I did find a small nit in the text, though:
>>>> 
>>>> s/”section in that”/”section that”
>>>
>>> My point is that this paragraph just is too hard to read. My problem isn't corresponds, it's
>>> "select" and "selected" together. Can you rewrite it so that it's clearer. Maybe just indicating
>>> that one is is the offer and one is in the answer?
>>
>> What about:
>>
>>   The answerer MUST select the "m=" section *in the answer* that corresponds to the
>>   selected offerer tagged "m=" section in the corresponding offer
>>   [Section 7.3.1] as the answerer tagged "m=" section.  In the answer
>>   the answerer BUNDLE-tag indicates the answerer tagged "m=" section.
>
> This seems clearer, but I'm not sure what "selected" is doing in "selected offerer tagged". Can you explain?

The answerer first selects the offer tagged "m=" section, as described in section 7.3.1. After that, it selects the corresponding "m=" section in the answer as the answerer tagged "m=" section.

Regards,

Christer