Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-evaluation-06

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Wed, 29 May 2013 13:02 UTC

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Date: Wed, 29 May 2013 15:02:37 +0200
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-evaluation-06
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On 2013-05-29 11:51, Ari Keränen wrote:
> Hi Magnus,
> 
> The diff looked good. Couple of quick nits:
> 
>    5.  The RTSP Client uses the RTSP Servers response to create TURN
> 
> s/Servers/Server's/
> 
>    7.  The first media packet to arrive at the TURN server on the
>        external port; If matching established permissions the TURN
>        server forwards the media packets to the RTSP client.
> 
> s/If matching/If there exists a matching/
> or /If the packet matches an/
> 

Thanks,

I have updated the draft to resolve these issues.

Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

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