[MMUSIC] SDP Directorate: Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-loss-conceal-05

"Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com> Mon, 03 June 2013 10:59 UTC

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From: "Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com>
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Subject: [MMUSIC] SDP Directorate: Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-loss-conceal-05
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I am the assigned SDP directorate reviewer for this draft. For background on the SDP directorate, please see the FAQ at
http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/sdp.html

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Summary:
- The RTCP XR extension syntax seems to have an issue, see below
- There are a few editorial issues

Issues:
1) Section 1.4: Can I use these metrics for the audio component of A/V applications? If yes, then section 1.4 sounds overly restrictive.

2) Capitalization of the block/metric names is inconsistent.

3) Section 5.1, first parag.: The document defines two blocks not one.

4) Section 5.1:

Why are using 

   xr-format =/ xr-conceal-block
   xr-format =/ xr-conc-sec-block

instead of

   xr-format =/ xr-conceal-block / xr-conc-sec-block

5) Section 6.1: Where do "NCS" and "NLC" come from? Why not choose more appropriate acronyms? Also use the correct registry name: "RTP Control Protocol Extended Reports (RTCP XR) Block Type Registry"

6) Section 6.2: Please use the correct registry name: "RTP Control Protocol Extended Reports (RTCP XR) Session Description Protocol (SDP) Parameters Registry".