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"Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com> Tue, 02 April 2024 12:39 UTC

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
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Dear authors, shepherd, and MOPS WG participants,

Thanks for the work done on this document.

As usual, please find below my AD review for this document. I am requesting either a revised I-D or a reply/explanation for all the points below before proceeding with the publication process (i.e., an IETF-wide Last Call).


  *   Abstract: expand AR


  *   Abstract: please explain “democratizing technology”


  *   Section 1: a reference to "seven-second delay" would be welcome.


  *   Please remove section 1.1 as there is no normative language in this I-D.


  *   Section 3: s/ layer 3 hop/ layer-3 hop/


  *   Section 3: “firewall on the Internet “ unsure whether there are firewalls on the Internet (either delete ‘firewall’ or specify the location, e.g., “at the edge”).


  *   Section 4: suggest specifying that the global Internet is used as the underlay.


  *   Section 4: suggest using https://github.com/martinthomson/aasvg for a nicer SVG graphic.


  *   Section 4: expand AMT already in this section.


  *   Section 4.1: “users on unicast-only networks (AMT Gateways)” is “(AMT gateways)” at the right location in this sentence or should it be phrased differently ? or s/users/residential gateways/ ? or both ?


  *   Section 4.2 should there be a reference to figure 1 when mentioning “on-net” ?


  *   Section 4.2: unsure whether a long digression on ASM vs. SSM fits this I-D. If so, then expand ASM.


  *   Section 5 while I like the “RaaS” concept, the actual term is not really defined in this section.


  *   Section 5: is there any operational drawbacks associated to TreeDN ? E.g., MTU reduction (due to tunnels), ... how to avoid ‘leak’ of paid content sent over mcast ? A forward reference to section 7 seems required to me.


  *   Section 7.2: CDN also tend to use HTTPS over QUIC (i.e., not over TCP).

Thanks again for the work done.

-éric

PS: thanks also for your patience: I took some vacations before and after the IETF week...

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