Re: [Mops] -13 of mops-ar-use-case

Belatedly (travel, covid, blah blah blah), thank you very much for your 
work on shepherding the document this far and providing the writeup, 
Stephan!

I have submitted this write up and requested publication of the 
document.

Best,
Leslie.

On 30 Nov 2023, at 20:44, Stephan Wenger wrote:

> All:
> I reviewed version 14 with respect to the missing part (dummy IANA 
> section, idnits), and found it ready.  My (I hope) final shepherd 
> report is attached in word format.
> Regards,
> Stephan
>
>
> From: Mops <mops-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Renan Krishna 
> <Renan.Krishna=40InterDigital.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> Date: Friday, October 27, 2023 at 07:12
> To: Stephan Wenger <stewe@stewe.org>, Akbar.Rahman@ericsson.com 
> <Akbar.Rahman@ericsson.com>
> Cc: mops@ietf.org <mops@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [Mops] -13 of mops-ar-use-case
> Hi Stephan,
>
> Please find our response to question 10 of the report added in the 
> attached file.
>
> Regards,
> Renan
>
> From: Mops <mops-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Stephan Wenger
> Sent: Monday, October 23, 2023 4:57 PM
> To: Renan Krishna <Renan.Krishna@InterDigital.com>; 
> Akbar.Rahman@ericsson.com
> Cc: mops@ietf.org
> Subject: [Mops] -13 of mops-ar-use-case
>
>
> Hi,
> Shepherd here.  I had a brief look.  Additional action items, before 
> this draft can progress:
>
> 1.      Add a dummy IANA section.
>
> 2.      I need your written disposition (outside the draft; and can be 
> short summaries) to question 10 of the report.  I would hope not, but 
> maybe the questions raised in the area questionnaires lead to further 
> modifications of the draft, especially in areas that you probably 
> consider side shows.
>
> 3.      Once you have -14 submission ready, run IDNITS in its most 
> verbose mode.  Given that the IDNITS tool reports the missing IANA 
> section, I don’t think you did, or if you did, then you didn’t 
> look at the report, or considered the warning of the missing IANA 
> section as irrelevant.  Neither is acceptable.  Please briefly explain 
> to me any errors/warnings IDNITS produces.
>
> 4.      After you addressed above three points, please submit -14.
> Thanks,
> Stephan

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