Re: [mpls-tp] Poll for draft-gray-mpls-tp-nm-req-03 to become an mplswg document

["Rolf Winter" <[e-mail]>]

Support,

Following are merely suggestions for editorial changes.


Section 2:

Quote:  For the management interface to the management system, an MPLS-
        TP NE is not expected to actively support more than one
        management protocol in any given deployment. The protocol to be
        supported is at the discretion of the operator.

In terms of requirements shouldn't that rather be "...an MPLS-TP NE MAY actively support more than one  management protocol..."


Section 4:

The list seems incomplete to me but the text does not make this clear. Therefore I would suggest to make the following change:

        In order to have the MCN operate properly, a number of
        management functions for the MCN are required <add>including</add>:


Section 5.3.2:

Quote: An MPLS-TP NE MUST provide alarm suppression functionality that
       prevents the generation of a superfluous alarms.

Remove the "a" 


Section 5.3.4:

Quote: The MPLS-TP ME SHOULD
       report local (environmental) alarms

I assume you mean NE above and not ME as e.g. defined in draft-busi-mpls-tp-oam-framework-00


Section 10 not needed I assume.


Hope these are of any help.

Best,

	Rolf


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> Subject: [mpls-tp] Poll for draft-gray-mpls-tp-nm-req-03 to become an
> mplswg document
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> All,
> 
> as you can see below the authors of draft-gray-mpls-tp-nm-req-03
> has request that we accept the draft as a working group draft.
> 
> This is to initiate a two week poll if we want to accept it as
> a working group document.
> 
> Please send your comments to the mpls-tp list.
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> /Loa
> 
> Eric Gray wrote:
> > A new version of this draft has been posted, based on comments
> > received and an editing session last month in Ipswich, UK.
> >
> > As discussed at the Ipswich meeting, we would now like to ask
> > the WG Chairs, and the WG, to adopt this version as a working
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> > Thanks in advance...
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> >
> >
> > A new version of I-D, draft-gray-mpls-tp-nm-req-03.txt has been
> > successfuly submitted by Eric Gray and posted to the IETF repository.
> >
> > Filename:	 draft-gray-mpls-tp-nm-req
> > Revision:	 03
> > Title:		 MPLS TP Network Management Requirements
> > Creation_date:	 2009-02-04
> > WG ID:		 Independent Submission
> > Number_of_pages: 20
> >
> > Abstract:
> > This document specifies the requirements necessary to manage the
> >
> >   elements and networks that support an MPLS Transport Profile
> >
> >   (MPLS-TP). This document is a product of a joint International
> >
> >   Telecommunications Union - Telecommunications Standardization
> >
> >   Sector (ITU-T) and Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF) effort
> >
> >   to include a MPLS Transport Profile within the IETF MPLS
> >
> >   architecture. The requirements are driven by the management
> >
> >   functionality needs defined by ITU-T for packet transport
> >
> >   networks.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >   Gray, et al
> >
> >
> >
> >   Expires August, 2009
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> >   Internet-Draft
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> > MPLS-TP NM Requirements
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