[mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02

Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 07 July 2017 04:07 UTC

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From: Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Date: Thu, 06 Jul 2017 21:07:53 -0700
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Subject: [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02

Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review result: Ready

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02

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Document:  draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2017-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-12
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-03

Summary: Ready
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Comment: 
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This is a very clear document, even for somebody quite
ignorant of the topic.

Nits:
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> This document also removes the unimplemented
> "Advertising Multiple Routes to a Destination" feature,...

I think it would be helpful if this said explicitly "as
specified in section 4 of RFC3107". (Not a big deal, unless
you have to edit the text for some other reason.)

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[mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls… Brian Carpenter