[mpls] AD action: Unblocking cluster C436 (draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl)

Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Wed, 28 February 2024 16:27 UTC

Return-Path: <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
X-Original-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: mpls@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 722CAC14F5F9; Wed, 28 Feb 2024 08:27:20 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.806
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.806 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, URIBL_DBL_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, URIBL_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=olddog.co.uk
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id MdorIvcU-11E; Wed, 28 Feb 2024 08:27:15 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mta5.iomartmail.com (mta5.iomartmail.com [62.128.193.155]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D92B6C14F5F6; Wed, 28 Feb 2024 08:27:10 -0800 (PST)
Received: from vs4.iomartmail.com (vs4.iomartmail.com [10.12.10.122]) by mta5.iomartmail.com (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id 41SGR8ZN000508; Wed, 28 Feb 2024 16:27:08 GMT
Received: from vs4.iomartmail.com (unknown [127.0.0.1]) by IMSVA (Postfix) with ESMTP id 858C446051; Wed, 28 Feb 2024 16:27:08 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from vs4.iomartmail.com (unknown [127.0.0.1]) by IMSVA (Postfix) with ESMTP id 793D44604F; Wed, 28 Feb 2024 16:27:08 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from asmtp1.iomartmail.com (unknown [10.12.10.248]) by vs4.iomartmail.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS; Wed, 28 Feb 2024 16:27:08 +0000 (GMT)
Received: from LAPTOPK7AS653V ([85.255.237.18]) (authenticated bits=0) by asmtp1.iomartmail.com (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id 41SGR6ag032411 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NO); Wed, 28 Feb 2024 16:27:07 GMT
Reply-To: adrian@olddog.co.uk
From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: 'RFC Editor' <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, 'Andrew - IETF' <andrew-ietf@liquid.tech>
Cc: mpls-chairs@tools.ietf.org, mpls@ietf.org, draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl.all@ietf.org
Date: Wed, 28 Feb 2024 16:27:06 -0000
Organization: Old Dog Consulting
Message-ID: <078701da6a62$f9b970b0$ed2c5210$@olddog.co.uk>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook 16.0
Thread-Index: AdpqYtt6VUoJf471Qru9NX52kh/q0Q==
Content-Language: en-gb
X-Originating-IP: 85.255.237.18
X-Thinkmail-Auth: adrian@olddog.co.uk
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed; d=olddog.co.uk; h=reply-to :from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:mime-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; s=20221128; bh=JrAw0ZMYXPkef8oy9mJIf D5o+z5VJU1TJw0hr78OvNQ=; b=iJMkUmMI8N/AMUPhKBGRBv4ix0rsWba9nXKe4 6lqfnZ+JNXv40HAXrbrYlK3jpgB3LEgQNucJEp9/NmKypJWeyVQzIzpI/Ni6NPf6 DiYEuKib5hNykyJ1cJNdPxEXYcz/aAcHzYxf27IXfQAniDEe17LCEb8xuIWkYIh3 ze52MLuLBAL4W1A6lbF5wKAhgSxVx2EBM3x4FuKWwsOiTQnaPoBoSaWNRX/bFf1Z SsTqgaV76iX6hvOl4+jDzYOrCQGQgNlspIkx7mb7JE3fw0KXprDN3d6o8aBlICsu G0m1llTs9o/0vo3ih0P56e2030V4qIY1hF9l10dyHvgm28vxw==
X-TM-AS-GCONF: 00
X-TM-AS-Product-Ver: IMSVA-9.1.0.2090-9.0.0.1002-28220.000
X-TM-AS-Result: No-0.167-10.0-31-10
X-imss-scan-details: No-0.167-10.0-31-10
X-TMASE-Version: IMSVA-9.1.0.2090-9.0.1002-28220.000
X-TMASE-Result: 10-0.166900-10.000000
X-TMASE-MatchedRID: PA+/WlSmJlsOwAmmWH5kBLPx3rO+jk2Q09la3X7jayawBwUtp0ukFvQj KMS8nEhXZfQGdwv+OGuri0qvV9KSBBNkdahYOEYR9DGkDtq4vAwBmf/gD11vZOHds5U8QrGM07z aVZEg+DPxLGIW+zBcT3n0x6scqY/TSYQ3EV2VFMa8coKUcaOOvZcE9F6aLBE1ggrVGi5LBfAhrs 1SyyiXTtMi/Gw8t6nAYwwk5WVZyGFccQ8eam5EfTl/1fD/GopdWwo771mVvkkfBWvYkdJgRgzKt 8/2P4LVIAcCikR3vq+26L9RBB4IBvP/RwbVKoWJ110tv7wC9kDsBzpCP4zpGuZ3y5y6ar2l
X-TMASE-SNAP-Result: 1.821001.0001-0-1-22:0,33:0,34:0-0
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mpls/Bphqtl_tm1RWS-pfsBw-r1SFBb8>
Subject: [mpls] AD action: Unblocking cluster C436 (draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl)
X-BeenThere: mpls@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39
Precedence: list
List-Id: Multi-Protocol Label Switching WG <mpls.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/mpls/>
List-Post: <mailto:mpls@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls>, <mailto:mpls-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 28 Feb 2024 16:27:20 -0000

Hi,

I've been looking at draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl. It is blocked in the RFC
Editor Queue waiting for a normative reference, draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-control,
which still has issues to resolve.

The reference to draft-ietf-mpls-sfl-control is made in two places in the
form of references to the original draft, draft-bryant-mpls-sfl-control. 

- The reference in section 13.2 is a piece of XML fudgery. It exists because
the
  other reference is within "artwork" in the XML and so throws an error in
idnits.
  The 13.2 reference is accompanied by an RFC-Editor-Note requesting that
the
  text be deleted. We can ignore this reference.

- The reference in 9.1 is, in fact, an error! The document at hand is a
generic
  specification and should not depend on a particular solution (control
plane
  or management plane), but the current definition of "SFL Batch" points to
  a specific protocol solution in draft-bryant/ietf-mpls-sfl-control. If we
fix
  this definition, we remove the need for the normative reference.

Hence:

In Section  9.1 "RFC6374 SFL TLV"
OLD
   SFL Batch The SFL batch that this SFL was allocated as part
             of see [I-D.bryant-mpls-sfl-control]
NEW
   SFL Batch An identifier for a collection of SFLs grouped together for
             management and control purposes.
END

---

In section 13.2 "Allocation of MPLS Loss/Delay TLV Object"
OLD
   RFC Editor please delete this para
   [RFC3032][I-D.bryant-mpls-sfl-control][RFC5036]
NEW
   RFC Editor please delete this para
   [RFC3032][RFC5036]
END

---

In section 16.1  "Normative References"

Remove the reference to [I-D.bryant-mpls-sfl-control]

===

I have agreed these changes with Stewart Bryant as the principal editor.
I hope the AD can agree this change, and we can move the document forward.

Cheers,
Adrian